The topic of protecting wildlife has been a controversial topic for some time. Some people are of the opinion that unnecessary attention and resources are invested to protect the wildlife, however, I strongly disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I will state the reasons for my views.
Firstly, in recent years, there are increasing numbers of wildlife listed as endangered or extinct. Research has shown that in the last decade, there has been a significant decrease in the percentage of land animals found in Africa due to deforestation. If protecting the wildlife have been widely publicized, people will gain a better understanding of the impact of deforestation on the animals. As a result, alternative measures could have been implemented to conserve the animals' natural habitats.
Secondly, many people do not seem to have any awareness or understand the need to protect wildlife. Based on a survey conducted recently, 95% of the participants indicated that they are not aware that measures can be taken to protect the animals. Consequently, no efforts are made in protecting the animals.
Lastly, some people have been murdering the animals as a form of sport. An example of this is, in a remote island in the Pacifics, there are people who hold the belief that by killing wild dolphins is a proof of masculinity. If there have been sufficient resources and efforts made by the government, perhaps animals will not be slaughtered unnecessarily for leisure.
To conclude, it is my firm belief that there have been insufficient attention and resources are given to protect wildlife. I strongly believe that it is imperative for the government as well as the animal welfare services to create more public awareness on the impact of human activities on animals so as to protect the wildlife.
The topic of protecting
wildlife
has been a controversial topic for
some
time.
Some
people
are of the opinion that unnecessary attention and resources
are invested
to
protect
the
wildlife
,
however
, I
strongly
disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I will state the reasons for my views.
Firstly
, in recent years, there are increasing numbers of
wildlife
listed as endangered or extinct. Research has shown that in the last decade, there has been a significant decrease in the percentage of land
animals
found in Africa due to deforestation. If protecting the
wildlife
have been
widely
publicized,
people
will gain a better understanding of the impact of deforestation on the
animals
.
As a result
, alternative measures could have
been implemented
to conserve the animals' natural habitats.
Secondly
,
many
people
do not seem to have any awareness or understand the need to
protect
wildlife
. Based on a survey conducted recently, 95% of the participants indicated that they are not aware that measures can
be taken
to
protect
the
animals
.
Consequently
, no efforts
are made
in protecting the animals.
Lastly
,
some
people
have been murdering the
animals
as a form of sport. An example of this is,
in a remote island
in the
Pacifics
, there are
people
who hold the belief that by killing wild dolphins is a proof of masculinity. If there have been sufficient resources and efforts made by the
government
, perhaps
animals
will not
be slaughtered
unnecessarily
for leisure.
To conclude
, it is my firm belief that there have been insufficient attention and resources are
given
to
protect
wildlife
. I
strongly
believe that it is imperative for the
government
as well
as the
animal
welfare services to create more public awareness on the impact of human activities on
animals
so as to
protect
the
wildlife
.
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