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Every country should have free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatment may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. What extent you agree or disagree? v.1

Every country should have free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatment may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. What extent you agree or disagree? v. 1
Healthy life is a basic need of human’s life. Many people believe that health services should be free from every country of the world. Even though, it is argued that advance health service cannot include in stating service. I partially agreed with the declared statement, but also disagreed with proposed proposal. Nowadays, every person wants healthy life and to maintain this they always go for regular medical checkup. Not only for regular checkups, but also they visit whenever they feel ill. Moreover, day by day the medical expenses touches the high pick, and gradually it becomes difficult for all classes of people to receive it. If government provides free therapeutic facilities for their people, then, it became beneficial for their people in the long run. Particularly, poor people who do not even get basic treatment, they can receive that announced facility. It is undoubtedly true that modern treatment is too much expensive. Despite the fact, advanced treatment needs to include in the announced project. Modern therapeutic facilities are necessary for all, if it is not included in proposed proposal, then specifically lower income people as well as middle income people will suffer a lot, ultimately no beneficiary outcome will establish. Another option could be, if the government couldn’t full fill the project in terms of financial prospectus then they could took support from the private sector and provide enough facilities to them so that they could give support to people by declaring health service. In conclusion, I can suggest that both public as well as private should work together on the proposed project for establishing healthy country.
Healthy life is a basic need of human’s life.
Many
people
believe that health services should be free from every country of the world.
Even though
, it
is argued
that advance health service cannot include in stating service. I
partially
agreed
with the declared statement,
but
also
disagreed with proposed proposal.

Nowadays, every person wants healthy life and to maintain this they always go for regular medical checkup. Not
only
for regular checkups,
but
also
they visit whenever they feel ill.
Moreover
, day by day the medical expenses touches the high pick, and
gradually
it becomes difficult for all classes of
people
to receive it. If
government
provides free therapeutic facilities for their
people
, then, it became beneficial for their
people
in the long run.
Particularly
, poor
people
who do not even
get
basic treatment, they can receive that announced facility.

It is
undoubtedly
true that modern treatment is too much expensive. Despite the fact, advanced treatment needs to include in the announced project. Modern therapeutic facilities are necessary for all, if it is not included in proposed proposal, then
specifically
lower income
people
as well
as middle income
people
will suffer a lot,
ultimately
no beneficiary outcome will establish.

Another option could be, if the
government
couldn’t full fill the project in terms of financial prospectus then they could
took
support from the private sector and provide
enough
facilities to them
so
that they could give support to
people
by declaring health service.

In conclusion
, I can suggest that both public
as well as
private should work together on the proposed project for establishing healthy country.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Every country should have free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatment may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. What extent you agree or disagree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
267 words
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