Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? v.9
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. v. 9
# Essay
Currently, numerous countries spend money as an invest for art, for instance music and theatre. On the contrary that some individuals reject this point of view, namely, they think that instead of this action government must spend money in public services. I, personally, disagree with this opinion and in this essay I prove my disagreement with some details.
Firstly, art is developing for several millenniums. It plays a vital role in individual's lives. And also it is spiritual nourishment for human being. Definitely, it has different appearance, such as performance, pictures, movies, musics as well as clips, concerts and so on. They reflect our spiritual world, worldview as well as our minds, insomuch they can be as a treatment for our pain, problem and so on. So that, people appreciate art and try to improve this as well as their investment in the art, such as the government also attendance for this.
From another angle, art can be the source of happiness, cheerfulness as well as pleasure. All of birthday, wedding parties and also different holidays, festivals could not be hilarious and joyful without music. Also, people can enjoy by concerts. It gives huge encouragement for individual's spirit as well as it gives platonic feelings. As well as, people can relax by watching movies. Most people very enjoy by watching film. And individuals can learn something from watching films, such as language or other country's culture as well as customs, traditions and so on. And some of them encourages by painting or drawing different kind of illust.
Generally, according to over mentioned point of views government must spend money as an invest in the art and it is not waste of money. However, it does not mean that government must not spend money in public services instead of art. Government should spend money not only in this, but also it should spend money on both of them.
# Essay
Currently
, numerous countries
spend
money
as
an invest
for
art
,
for instance
music and
theatre
.
On the contrary
that
some
individuals reject this point of view,
namely
, they
think
that
instead
of this action
government
must
spend
money
in public services. I,
personally
, disagree with this opinion and in this essay I prove my disagreement with
some
details
.
Firstly
,
art
is developing for several millenniums. It plays a vital role in individual's
lives
. And
also
it is spiritual nourishment for human being. Definitely, it has
different
appearance, such as performance, pictures, movies, musics as
well
as clips, concerts and
so
on. They reflect our spiritual world, worldview as
well
as our minds, insomuch they can be as a treatment for our pain, problem and
so
on.
So
that,
people
appreciate
art
and try to
improve
this as
well
as their investment in the
art
, such as the
government
also
attendance for this.
From another angle,
art
can be the source of happiness, cheerfulness as
well
as pleasure.
All of birthday
, wedding parties and
also
different
holidays, festivals could not be hilarious and joyful without music.
Also
,
people
can enjoy by concerts. It gives huge encouragement for individual's spirit as
well
as it gives
platonic
feelings. As
well
as,
people
can relax by watching movies. Most
people
very
enjoy by watching film. And individuals can learn something from watching films, such as language or other country's culture as
well
as customs, traditions and
so
on. And
some
of them encourages by painting or drawing
different
kind of
illust
.
Generally
, according to over mentioned point of views
government
must
spend
money
as
an invest
in the
art
and it is not waste of
money
.
However
, it does not mean that
government
must
not
spend
money
in public services
instead
of
art
.
Government
should
spend
money
not
only
in this,
but
also
it should
spend
money
on both of them.
22Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes