Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.5
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. with this statement? v. 5
At present, most government spend some part of their budget on not only public services, but also the arts, such as, music and theatre. In my opinion, although a proportion of government spending should be channeled towards this sector, however, most should be spent on public services.
It is very important that the governments spend a significant amount of its budget on public services because these are our hospitals, roads, schools and so on and they determine the quality of life we live. Take for example, the United Kingdom, the government has recently reduced public spending on health and education, which has resulted in an increased hospital treatments waiting lists and fewer teachers, both of which will have further adverse effects on education standards and health. This demonstrates the importance of ensuring that a large proportion of government money is spent on public services as it is the only way to maintain the welfare of the populace.
However, this does not mean that the arts should be completely neglected for these reasons. Firstly, it is difficult for many arts institutions to generate income witout the help of the government as a lot of people are not prepared to pay high entrance fees for places such as art galleries or theatres, so without some help from the government, such places may have to shut down. Secondly, the arts have an important impact on our quality of life, with many people deriving great pleasure in going to see music and theatre performances. Lastly, the performing and literary arts such as dance and books help keep our culture, heritage and history alive for the future generations.
In conclusion, although the majority of government spending should be directed towards public services, however, spending some money on the arts is also essential and should continue because it is not a waste of money. A balance is required to ensure that public services are maintained while the arts remain available to all.
At present, most
government
spend
some
part of their budget on not
only
public
services
,
but
also
the
arts
, such as, music and
theatre
. In my opinion, although a proportion of
government
spending
should
be channeled
towards this sector,
however
, most should
be spent
on
public
services.
It is
very
important
that the
governments
spend a significant amount of its budget on
public
services
because
these are our hospitals, roads, schools and
so
on and
they determine the quality of life we
live
. Take
for example
, the United Kingdom, the
government
has recently
reduced
public
spending
on health and education, which has resulted in an increased hospital treatments waiting lists and fewer teachers, both of which will have
further
adverse effects on education standards and health. This demonstrates the importance of ensuring that a large proportion of
government
money
is spent
on
public
services
as it is the
only
way to maintain the welfare of the populace.
However
, this does not mean that the
arts
should be completely neglected for these reasons.
Firstly
, it is difficult for
many
arts
institutions to generate income
witout
the
help
of the
government
as
a lot of
people
are not prepared to pay high entrance fees for places such as
art
galleries or
theatres
,
so
without
some
help
from the
government
, such places may
have to
shut down.
Secondly
, the
arts
have an
important
impact on our quality of life, with
many
people
deriving great pleasure in going to
see
music and
theatre
performances.
Lastly
, the performing and literary
arts
such as dance and books
help
keep
our culture, heritage and history alive for the future generations.
In conclusion
, although the majority of
government
spending
should
be directed
towards
public
services
,
however
,
spending
some
money on the
arts
is
also
essential and should continue
because
it is not a waste of money. A balance
is required
to ensure that
public
services
are maintained
while the
arts
remain available to all.
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32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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