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Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give your own opinion v.1

Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. give your own opinion v. 1
Students have traditionally been taught in large lecture halls. However, the plausablility of this method of teaching is under scrutiny as online lecture delivery is increasingly being lobbied for. In my opinion, online teaching is a better alternative because it is time efficient as well as convenient for the students. To begin with, students face time constraints for studies on a daily basis. This is because they have to travel long distances to and from educational institutions in order to be taught in lecture halls. This travel time, however, can be saved if lectures are delivered through the Internet. For instance, a student can be spared 2 hours of travel time from Peshawar to Swabi, which can be used for homework purposes. Therefore, online delivery of lectures is beneficial for the students. Similarly, aquisition of lectures through the Internet is highly convenient for the students. They can, for example, rewatch a lecture several times until they fully understand the topic. In addition to this, students can take a break from the lecture and resume at a later, suitable time. Traditional way of lecturing, however, eliminate these benefits and subsequently, put unnecessary stress on the students. Therefore, the method of online delivery of lectures is justified against traditional ways. In conclusion, educating students over the internet is indisputably better than older ways of teaching. Educational institutes in the future must move on from teachings in the lecture halls and initiate online classes.
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online
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lecture
delivery is
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online
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teaching
is a better alternative
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time
efficient
as well
as convenient for the students.

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with,
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constraints for studies on a daily basis. This is
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because
they
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have to
travel long distances to and from educational institutions in order to
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in
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lecture
halls. This travel
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time
,
however
, can
be saved
if
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lectures
are delivered
through the Internet.
For instance
, a
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student
can
be spared
2 hours of travel
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time
from Peshawar to
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Swabi
, which can be
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used
for homework purposes.
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,
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online
delivery of
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lectures
is beneficial for the students.

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,
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of
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lectures
through the Internet is
highly
convenient for the
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students
. They can,
for example
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a
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lecture
several
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times
until they
fully
understand the topic.
In addition
to this,
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students
can take a break from the
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lecture
and resume at a later, suitable
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time
. Traditional way of lecturing,
however
, eliminate these benefits and
subsequently
, put unnecessary
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stress
on the
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students
.
Therefore
, the method of
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online
delivery of
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lectures
is justified
against traditional ways.

In conclusion
, educating
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students
over the internet is
indisputably
better than older ways of
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teaching
. Educational institutes in the future
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must
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move
on from
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teachings
in the
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lecture
halls and initiate
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online
classes.
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32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. give your own opinion v. 1

Essay
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4 paragraphs
241 words
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