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Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching With the technology available today there is no justification for it and everything should be done online Do you agree or disagree v.2

Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching With the technology available today there is no justification for it and everything should be done online v. 2
A highly controversial issue relates to whether the authorities should regulate the design of recently built buildings in enormous cities or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view andd then provide my own opinion on the matter. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of controlling the scheme of lately erected constructions considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for this belief is that the governments could maintain safety for people using the buildings. It is also possible to say that the design of recent constructions must meet some safety standards so that they will not cause dangers to their users in the future. For instance, there are earthquakes frequently occurring frequently in Taiwan. Hence, its government compels most of the buildings to meet some standards to be sustainable to earthquakes. On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that people who invest in the buildings should have rights to design them according to their preferences. People often hold this notion because there will be a wide variety of amazing constructions if the designers feel free to be creative in designing the structures. In other words, being free to decide on the design of the buildings, designers may create extraordinary erections which will contribute to architectural diversity of a country. To illustrate, Landmark 81 has become the tallest building in Vietnam with an amazing design due to the permission of creativity. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their strong points. On balance, however, I suppose that the design of new constructions should be regulated by the governments because all of the buildings should be guaranteed to be safe in use.
A
highly
controversial issue relates to whether the authorities should regulate the
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design
of recently built
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buildings
in enormous cities or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view
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andd
then provide my
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own
opinion on the matter.

On one side of the argument, there are
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people
who argue that the benefits of controlling the scheme of lately erected
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constructions
considerably
outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for this belief is that the
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governments
could maintain safety for
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people
using the
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buildings
. It is
also
possible to say that the
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design
of recent
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constructions
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must
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meet
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some
safety standards
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so
that they will not cause
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dangers
to their users in the future.
For instance
, there are earthquakes
frequently
occurring
frequently
in Taiwan.
Hence
, its
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government
compels most of the
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buildings
to
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meet
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some
standards to be sustainable to earthquakes.

On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to
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make
the opposing case. It is
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often
argued that
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people
who invest in the
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buildings
should have rights to
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design
them according to their preferences.
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People
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often
hold this notion
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because
there will be a wide variety of amazing
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constructions
if the designers feel free to be creative in designing the structures.
In other words
, being free to decide on the
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design
of the
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buildings
, designers may create extraordinary erections which will contribute to architectural diversity of a country. To illustrate, Landmark 81 has become the tallest
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building
in Vietnam with an amazing
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design
due to the permission of creativity.

In conclusion
, I believe both arguments have their strong points. On balance,
however
, I suppose that the
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design
of new
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constructions
should
be regulated
by the
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governments
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because
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all of the
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buildings
should
be guaranteed
to be safe in
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use
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching With the technology available today there is no justification for it and everything should be done online v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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