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Giving lectures in auditorium to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To whta extend do you agree or disagree. v.2

Giving lectures in auditorium to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To whta extend v. 2
It is argued that delivering lectures in halls to a huge group of students is outdated, instead class should be taken exclusively on internet. I totally disagree with this statement as according to my perspective, student - teacher interaction is crucial to achieve higher scores and ensure accurate learning. Learning is an act which requires active participation of student as well as teacher. Studying online is considered to be convenient method of learning; however, it is better to attend real lectures rather than virtual. If the students will attend lectures in school, they can ask any queries in the end. This will clear their doubts and help them to perform better in exams. Moreover, teachers would be aware of the attendence which means they will know how many students are absent from the class. But keeping this record is impossible in online teaching. Motivation is another attribute that is necessary for learning and this can only be received in real lectures. While studying with fellow students, one can be motivated to study harder by seeing others. In addition, teachers also give certain examples of some successful personalities that inspire the students. Although attending lectures in auditorium can foster the learning process, it can also instill other skills like discipline and etiquettes to the students. For example, in schools, pupil learn good behaviour, punctuality, and team work etcetera. In conclusion, it is important to attend lectures because they have overwhelming advantages. According to me, online lectures are only helpful for gaining knowledge while doing job as employed people have little time to attend physical lectures. Thus, online classes will be feasible for them.
It
is argued
that delivering
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lectures
in halls to a huge group of
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students
is outdated
,
instead
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class
should
be taken
exclusively on internet. I
totally
disagree with this statement as according to my perspective,
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student
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-
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teacher
interaction is crucial to achieve higher scores and ensure accurate learning.

Learning is an act which requires active participation of
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student
as well
as
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teacher
. Studying
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online
is considered
to be convenient method of learning;
however
, it is better to
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attend
real
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lectures
rather
than virtual. If the
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students
will
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attend
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lectures
in school, they can ask any queries in the
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end
. This will
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clear
their doubts and
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help
them to perform better in exams.
Moreover
,
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teachers
would be aware of the
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attendence
which means they will know how
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many
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students
are absent from the
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class
.
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But
keeping this record is impossible in
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online
teaching.

Motivation is another attribute
that is
necessary for learning and this can
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only
be received
in real
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lectures
. While studying with fellow
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students
, one can
be motivated
to study harder by seeing others.
In addition
,
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teachers
also
give certain examples of
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some
successful personalities that inspire the
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students
. Although attending
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lectures
in auditorium can foster the learning process, it can
also
instill other
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skills
like discipline and
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etiquettes
to the
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students
.
For example
, in schools, pupil learn
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good
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behaviour
, punctuality, and team work etcetera.

In conclusion
, it is
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important
to
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attend
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lectures
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because
they have overwhelming advantages.
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According to me
,
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online
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lectures
are
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only
helpful for gaining knowledge while doing job as employed
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people
have
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little
time to
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attend
physical
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lectures
.
Thus
,
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online
classes will be feasible for them.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Giving lectures in auditorium to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To whta extend v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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