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Formal exams are used to assess students at the end of each semester in many countries. Why are these exams used by schools and university? What other types of assessment are possible? v.6

Formal exams are used to assess students at the end of each semester in many countries. Why are these exams used by schools and university? What other types of assessment are possible? v. 6
Nowadays, schools and universities, around the globe tend to follow exams to evaluate their students at the end of every academic calendar. This essay will illustrate about the reasons for the exams and also shed some light on the alternative methods to examine the students. First of all, The traditional examination is very efficient in terms of saving time and evaluate all the students at the same time. This type of examination will treat all the students equally without any bias or partiality. Furthermore, based on the performance of the students it can be determined to promote or demote in the current academic year and also it will enable the teachers to produce a progress report to give feedback to the parents. For example, the recent study conducted by the Delhi University revealed that 85% of the parents are satisfied with the traditional exam method and the progress report mechanism. On the other hand, schools and colleges are adopting innovative learning methods like smart classroom, activity orientated subjects, interview, oral presentation and project work. Oral presentation will enable the students to do the research on the given topic to prepare and present in front of a large audience, this will help the students to overcome stage fear and excel in that subject. For instance, it is evident that one on one interview with students will provide teacher to understand better about the strength and weakness of that individual. To summarize, Whether or not, it is essential to use the traditional exam pattern depends on the context of the situation. But it is also important to adopt new methodologies like oral presentation and interview to improve the education system.
Nowadays, schools and universities, around the globe tend to follow exams to evaluate their
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students
at the
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end
of every academic calendar. This essay will illustrate about the reasons for the exams and
also
shed
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some
light on the alternative methods to examine the students.

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First of all
, The traditional examination is
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very
efficient in terms of saving time and evaluate all the
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students
at the same time. This type of examination will treat all the
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students
equally
without any bias or partiality.
Furthermore
, based on the performance of the
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students
it can
be determined
to promote or demote in the
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current
academic year and
also
it will enable the teachers to produce a progress report to give feedback to the parents.
For example
, the recent study conducted by the Delhi University revealed that 85% of the parents
are satisfied
with the traditional exam method and the progress report mechanism.

On the other hand
, schools and colleges are adopting innovative learning methods like smart classroom, activity orientated subjects, interview, oral presentation and project work. Oral presentation will enable the
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students
to do the research on the
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given
topic to prepare and present in front of a large audience, this will
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help
the
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students
to overcome stage fear and excel in that subject.
For instance
, it is evident that one on one interview with
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students
will provide teacher to understand better about the strength and weakness of that individual.

To summarize
,
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Whether or not
, it is essential to
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use
the traditional exam pattern depends on the context of the situation.
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But
it is
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important
to adopt new methodologies like oral presentation and interview to
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improve
the education system.
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IELTS essay Formal exams are used to assess students at the end of each semester in many countries. Why are these exams used by schools and university? What other types of assessment are possible? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
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