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Formal examination have become the most common way of assessing a student's performance. Is it a positive or negative development, in your view? v.1

Formal examination have become the most common way of assessing a student's performance. Is it a positive or negative development, in your view? v. 1
For many decades, written exams are considered to be an essential part of the education system. It has been generally seen that, exams play a paramount role in not only determining student’s career path, but also their intellectual level. This essay will discuss why I firmly believe that formal examinations is advantageous for students. Most schools and universities require minimum grades to allow student’s to upgrade to the next class or module. They follow this practice because it shows the hard and dedication of an individual enrolled in the course. If there is no points based system to clear the subject, then students may not take their education seriously. In the United Kingdom, for Instance, it is mandatory for every student to clear each term exam in order to sit for the next term. This method often maintains the discipline of the student so that he or she stay focused on their future goals. Therefore, such examinations are used as a best method to assess student’s ability throughout the year. Another compelling reason is various job opportunities which can be successfully achieved through formal tests. Often global companies follow the general criteria of shortlisting the suitable candidates for their organisation according to the marks. Moreover, such examination also helps in obtaining refuted government jobs. In India, for instance, a formal examination is conducted yearly to hire individuals for a particular job sector. Hence, this type of examination develops the feeling of healthy competition between peers to drive towards their goals. In conclusion, traditional examination not only builds the intellectual mind of an individual, but also urges them to work hard for their ambitions. I strongly believe that, there are numerous benefits of formal examinations, especially for competitive exams.
For
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many
decades, written exams
are considered
to be an essential part of the education system. It has been
generally
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seen
that, exams play a paramount role in not
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only
determining
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student’s
career path,
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but
also
their intellectual level. This essay will discuss why I
firmly
believe that
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formal
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examinations
is advantageous for students.

Most schools and universities require minimum grades to
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allow
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student’s
to upgrade to the
next
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class
or module. They follow this practice
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because
it
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shows
the
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hard
and dedication of an individual enrolled in the course. If
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there is no points
based system to
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clear
the subject, then
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students
may not take their education
seriously
. In the United Kingdom,
for Instance
, it is mandatory for every
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student
to
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clear
each term exam in order to sit for the
next
term. This method
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often
maintains the discipline of the
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student
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so
that he or she
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stay
focused on their future goals.
Therefore
, such
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examinations
are
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used
as
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a
best method to assess
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student’s
ability throughout the year.

Another compelling reason is various job opportunities which can be
successfully
achieved through
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formal
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tests
.
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Often
global
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companies
follow the general criteria of shortlisting the suitable candidates for their
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organisation
according to the marks.
Moreover
, such
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examination
also
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helps
in obtaining refuted
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government
jobs. In India,
for instance
, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
formal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
examination
is conducted
yearly to hire individuals for a particular job sector.
Hence
, this type of
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examination
develops the feeling of healthy competition between peers to drive towards their goals.

In conclusion
, traditional
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examination
not
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only
builds the intellectual mind of an individual,
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but
also
urges them to work
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hard
for their ambitions. I
strongly
believe that, there are numerous benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
formal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
examinations
,
especially
for competitive exams.
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IELTS essay Formal examination have become the most common way of assessing a student's performance. Is it a positive or negative development, in your view? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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