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Foreign tourist abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words v.2

Foreign tourist abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. v. 2
There is no gainsaying the given topic attracts the immediate attention owing to its uniqueness and versatility. There is always a heated debate on to what extent foreign tourists should be treated in terms of accommodation and overall costing. A group of people assert that foreign tourists should be charged more than locals to facilitate economic stability. In my opinion, I slightly disagree to this verdict as it might be discouraging for people to visit different historical locations around the floor being overpriced. To begin with, there are a lot of tourist’s attractions around the world. These are always flooded with tourists throughout the year. Putting up a high price for foreign tourist as compared to local would leave a negative impact as this would depict a clear sense of discrimination and biasness. There is already a price variant within different countries as dollar price in Pakistan would differ as compared to India. By exchanging local currency in a foreign currency most of the tourists are already paying high price. For instance a tourist from Pakistan is paying 100 dollars for twin tower visit in Malaysia, it would cost him 12800 per ticket whereas for a US national its 100 dollars only. To elucidate it further, despite of having financial challenges people around the world are eager to explore different cultures and historical attractions, in order to learn diversified culture around the globe. By imposing high pricing, diminishing trend would be observed in tourists visiting different countries as planned their visit budget according to their capacity and limit. On the contrary, by leveraging high prices, this would certainly boost economic stability. For any country tourist visits and exploration plays an important part in achieving economic goals. This idea of putting high prices would certainly bring incremental revenue. To recapitulate the aforementioned, while deciding the price factors for tourist’s attractions certain elements or consequences must be kept in mind. There should be a moderate approach to this ideation. Prices should not be too high that it kills the ultimate purpose of economic boost. Government should undertake considerations and expectations from tourist’s perspective also.
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topic attracts the immediate attention owing to its uniqueness and versatility. There is always a heated debate on to what extent
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foreign
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tourists
should
be treated
in terms of accommodation and
overall
costing. A group of
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people
assert that
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foreign
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tourists
should
be charged
more than locals to facilitate
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economic
stability. In my opinion, I
slightly
disagree to this verdict as it might be discouraging for
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people
to
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visit
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different
historical locations
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around
the floor
being overpriced
.

To
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begin
with, there are
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a lot of
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tourist’s
attractions
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around
the world. These are always flooded with
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tourists
throughout the year. Putting up a
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high
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price
for
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foreign
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tourist
as compared to local would
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leave
a
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negative
impact as this would depict a
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clear
sense of discrimination and
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biasness
. There is already a
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price
variant within
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different
countries as dollar
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price
in Pakistan would differ as compared to India. By exchanging local currency in a
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foreign
currency most of the
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tourists
are already paying
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high
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price
.
For instance
a
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tourist
from Pakistan is paying 100 dollars for twin tower
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visit
in Malaysia, it would cost him 12800 per ticket whereas for a US national its 100 dollars
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only
. To elucidate it
further
,
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despite of
having financial challenges
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people
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around
the world are eager to explore
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different
cultures and historical attractions, in order to learn diversified culture
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around
the globe. By imposing
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high
pricing, diminishing trend would
be observed
in
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tourists
visiting
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different
countries as planned their
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visit
budget according to their capacity and limit.

On the contrary
, by leveraging
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high
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prices
, this would
certainly
boost
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economic
stability. For any country
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tourist
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visits
and exploration plays an
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important
part in achieving
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economic
goals. This
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idea
of putting
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high
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prices
would
certainly
bring incremental revenue.

To recapitulate the aforementioned, while deciding the
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price
factors for
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tourist’s
attractions certain elements or consequences
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must
be
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kept
in mind. There should be a moderate approach to this ideation.
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Prices
should not be too
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high
that it kills the ultimate purpose of
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economic
boost.
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Government
should undertake considerations and expectations from
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tourist’s
perspective
also
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Foreign tourist abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
352 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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