For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.4
For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. v. 4
Life is changing, load of duties towards people is increasing, leading people to work hard to make extra money to survive in this world. Some people agree and disagree with the idea, that there are reasons why people work hard to earn money.
On one hand, most people these days try their best to work more, to make a lot of money and some agree with it. First, they work hard to support their families provide their needs and expenses. Second, young people start their jobs early, to save money to enjoy their time by traveling or spending money on vacations and activities. Moreover, a number of people in many countries, work hard to earn a lot of money, to buy house, have a family and take care of it, addition to secure a good future for them. For example, I started working at age of 15, to earn and save money to have all my needs and be a dependent person. From my side I agree and believe; to be a successful person in this life you must work hard be brave.
On the other hand, some people think the opposite and disagree that they must work and tired themselves to earn money. First, people believe that they need to live a normal life, without difficulties and harming their health, for not taking a break to enjoy the moment. Second, money for some human being isn’t everything, they prefer to do their job and spend their free time with family, friends and be happy. However, some rich people, wish if they can live the same way as all people and give their time to their family and live each day by day. For example, one of my friends, all he cares about is to be next to his kids and wife more than money, he is satisfied about what he’s doing. In my opinion I disagree, where men can control and schedule his life and enjoy every period equally.
In conclusion, humans agree and disagree with the idea they must work hard to make money. In my opinion, to be a man with achievement, you can succeed in working hard, making money, and enjoy your life with your beloved.
Life
is changing, load of duties towards
people
is
increasing, leading
people
to
work
hard
to
make
extra
money
to survive in this world.
Some
people
agree
and
disagree
with the
idea
, that there are reasons why
people
work
hard
to
earn
money.
On one hand, most
people
these days try their best to
work
more, to
make
a lot of
money
and
some
agree
with it.
First
, they
work
hard
to support their
families
provide their needs and expenses. Second, young
people
start
their jobs early, to save
money
to
enjoy
their time by traveling or spending
money
on vacations and activities.
Moreover
, a number of
people
in
many
countries,
work
hard
to
earn
a lot of
money
, to
buy
house
, have a
family
and take care of it, addition to secure a
good
future for them.
For example
, I
started
working at age of 15, to
earn
and save
money
to have all my needs and be a dependent person. From my side I
agree
and believe; to be a successful person in this
life
you
must
work
hard
be brave.
On the other hand
,
some
people
think
the opposite and
disagree
that they
must
work
and tired themselves to
earn
money
.
First
,
people
believe that they need to
live
a normal
life
, without difficulties and harming their health, for not taking a break to
enjoy
the moment. Second,
money
for
some
human being isn’t everything, they prefer to do their job and spend their free time with
family
, friends and be happy.
However
,
some
rich
people
, wish if they can
live
the same way as all
people
and give their time to their
family
and
live
each day by day.
For example
, one of my friends, all he cares about is to be
next
to his kids and wife more than
money
, he
is satisfied
about what he’s doing. In my opinion I
disagree
, where
men
can control and schedule his
life
and
enjoy
every period
equally
.
In conclusion
, humans
agree
and
disagree
with the
idea
they
must
work
hard
to
make
money
.
In
my opinion, to be a
man
with achievement, you can succeed in working
hard
, making
money
, and
enjoy
your
life
with your beloved.
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62Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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