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Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think it would be better for the environment and economy if people only eat the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think it would be better for the environment and economy if people only eat the local food produced by farmers. v. 2
Edible fresh and packaged food products have to cover long distance to reach final consumer. Some people opine locally sourced food items should be consumed for an ecological and economical advantage. This essay mostly disagrees with the given view point and will explain reasons for the same. Firstly, as technological innovations has spur the growth rate of economies from agrarian to service oriented industries, our lifestyles are oriented to fast paced tracks, with limited time. So, the need of hour is to have processed foods as compared to local raw products. Economies of scale will further lower the cost of production and transportation. Additionally masses will have variety and lot more choices to select from. This will make market more competitive and less monopolized. For instance, recent study by Boston University, Sociology wing highlighted that there was 26% increase in people relocating other continents due to availability of local food items. Secondly, though major input costs include transportation, this would be minimized with the advent of “electronic vehicles” with high-efficiency. Furthermore, freshness of raw fruits and vegetables can be sustained with cold storages and transportation services. Also, economic progress is sustainable in long run when there is trade happening with equivalent demand and supply levels. For instance, as per a recent report released by ministry of commerce, government of India has made a positive correlation between major FMCG (fast moving consumer goods) companies higher sales net. Farmer’s income from where these companies source the raw material. To conclude, limitation in sourcing food supplies from local markets will only lead to limited market capability and fewer options to suits everyone’s taste.
Edible fresh and packaged
food
products
have to
cover long distance to reach final consumer.
Some
people
opine
locally
sourced
food
items should
be consumed
for an ecological and economical advantage. This essay
mostly
disagrees with the
given
view point and will
explain
reasons for the same.

Firstly
, as technological innovations has
spur
the growth rate of economies from agrarian to service oriented industries, our lifestyles
are oriented
to
fast
paced
tracks
, with limited time.
So
, the need of hour is to have processed
foods
as compared to local raw products. Economies of scale will
further
lower the cost of production and transportation.
Additionally
masses will have variety and lot more choices to select from. This will
make
market more competitive and less monopolized.
For instance
, recent study by Boston University, Sociology wing highlighted that there was 26% increase in
people
relocating other continents due to availability of local
food
items.

Secondly
, though major input costs include transportation, this would
be minimized
with the advent of “electronic vehicles” with high-efficiency.
Furthermore
, freshness of raw fruits and vegetables can
be sustained
with
cold
storages
and transportation services.
Also
, economic progress is sustainable in long run when there is trade happening with equivalent demand and supply levels.
For instance
, as per a recent report released by ministry of commerce,
government
of India has made a
positive
correlation between major FMCG (
fast
moving consumer
goods
)
companies
higher sales net. Farmer’s income from where these
companies
source the raw material.

To conclude
, limitation in sourcing
food
supplies from local markets will
only
lead to limited market capability and fewer options to suits everyone’s taste.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think it would be better for the environment and economy if people only eat the local food produced by farmers. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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