Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. Whathave you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specificexamples and details to support your response. v.2
Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. Whathave you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specificexamples and details to support your response. v. 2
Nowadays, a lot of people love to buy things on large malls in big cities rather than in small local shops in the town. While it has something beneficial to do with regards to the economic development of big cities, I personally think that it would impose a negative effect in the local towns, on the contrary.
First, if people do not shop in local stores, there is a definite possibility that the owners of tiny businesses would incur a defeat in business as no one is patronizing the products being sold in the shop. The ones who are suffering with this kind of practice are the owners of small stores as the income will not suffice the operating expenses of the store, most especially the salary of the employees. For instance, in our hometown in Valencia, a lot of people do not buy locally made products in the public markets as they would rather choose to travel to big cities and purchase their needs there. Eventually, a lot of small stores have been closed due to this happening.
In the event of small stores eventually shutting down, there is a huge probability that there will be no work be made available for the local residents. Again, the people are the ones who will most likely suffer as there will be no available income to afford the basic needs of the every individual, especially with food and basic shelter. To illustrate, persons who have no jobs, like in the Philippines, tend to just sleep along the road and search for food from scraps and garbage bins, which is quite pitiful.
In conclusion, people who love to buy stuff from shopping centres in metro cities is quite alarming as it has a domino effect of affecting the mini-town's economy and individuals will eventually lose their jobs in the long run if it continues to happen.
Nowadays,
a lot of
people
love
to
buy
things on large malls in
big
cities
rather
than in
small
local
shops in the town. While it has something beneficial to do
with regards to
the economic development of
big
cities
, I
personally
think
that it would impose a
negative
effect in the
local
towns,
on the contrary
.
First
, if
people
do not shop in
local
stores
, there is a
definite
possibility that the owners of tiny businesses would incur a defeat in business as no one is patronizing the products
being sold
in the shop. The
ones
who
are suffering with this kind of practice are the owners of
small
stores
as the income will not suffice the operating expenses of the
store
, most
especially
the salary of the employees.
For instance
, in our hometown in Valencia,
a lot of
people
do not
buy
locally
made products in the public markets as they would
rather
choose to travel to
big
cities
and
purchase
their needs there.
Eventually
,
a lot of
small
stores
have
been closed
due to this happening.
In the
event
of
small
stores
eventually
shutting down, there is a huge probability that there will be no work
be made
available for the
local
residents. Again, the
people
are the
ones
who
will most likely suffer as there will be no available income to afford the basic needs of the every individual,
especially
with food and basic shelter. To illustrate, persons
who
have no jobs, like in the Philippines, tend to
just
sleep along the road and search for food from scraps and garbage bins, which is quite pitiful.
In conclusion
,
people
who
love
to
buy
stuff from shopping
centres
in metro
cities
is quite alarming as it has a domino effect of affecting the mini-town's economy and individuals will
eventually
lose their jobs in the long run if it continues to happen.
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