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Fiction (such as short stories or novels) can teach us more about life than textbooks can”. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? v.2

Fiction (such as short stories or novels) can teach us more about life than textbooks can”. v. 2
People may read many different books during their life. Normally, books can be classified in two groups, reality based textbooks which address the fundamental basic human science and novels and non-realistic texts known as fictional books. Some people think that we should read more textbooks. However, some others suggested that fictional books can help us more and be much beneficial for us. I believe that we should read more fictional books rather than the old huge textbooks and I have some good reasons to prove it. First, I think people and especially young adults read enough old school thick textbooks every day in high schools and collages without any outcome. Generally they cover mostly a highlighted series of information about any science and they mostly just mentioned the cold facts and argued their proof mathematically or logically. They have not put any glimpse of matter that could stimulate readers’ sense of innovation totally. Imagination and dreaming are some powers that have been addressed less effectively in textbooks. In this world we need to create new technologies and train skillful and innovative persons since our societies are growing so fast and creative engineers and managers place are empty in our occupation cycle. Fictional books with their ability to turning impossible facts to possible events may open some pathways in their readers' minds to solve a complicated severe problem with the help of these books. For example, flying was a far unreachable dream for human for centuries which children can read about it only in fictional books. But reading these kind of books eventually inspired two engineer brothers for going beyond their fear and try to face an experience that one day seems to be a joke. Also, fictional books create a context for all people to encourage them about writing. It triggers a joy and enthusiasm in readers that can assist them in their way of being great writers, because text books only show you the achievements of the others without leaving any question mark in their readers’ minds to follow their subject by themselves. Fictional books on the other hand bring a vast crafted world among your sight to observe it and even being part of it. In conclusion, people spend a lot of their time reading variety of books during school or in universities and at work. These books should coach your creativeness and innovation besides adding something new to your information. Fictional books provide us with more information about a better life. So reading those set of books might be more beneficial than rough boring textbooks.
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during their life.
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,
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can
be classified
in two groups, reality based
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textbooks
which address the fundamental basic human science and novels and non-realistic texts known as
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fictional
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books
.
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people
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read
more
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textbooks
.
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,
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some
others suggested that
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fictional
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books
can
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help
us more and be much beneficial for us. I believe that we should
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read
more
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fictional
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books
rather
than the
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old
huge
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textbooks
and I have
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some
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reasons to prove it.

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, I
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think
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people
and
especially
young adults
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read
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enough
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old
school thick
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textbooks
every day in high schools and collages without any outcome.
Generally
they cover
mostly
a highlighted series of information about any
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science and
they
mostly
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just
mentioned the
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cold
facts and argued their proof
mathematically
or
logically
. They have not put any glimpse of matter that could stimulate readers’ sense of innovation
totally
.

Imagination and dreaming are
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some
powers that have
been addressed
less
effectively
in
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textbooks
. In this world we need to create new technologies and train skillful and innovative persons since our societies are growing
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so
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fast
and creative engineers and managers place are empty in our occupation cycle.
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Fictional
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books
with their ability to turning impossible facts to possible
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events
may open
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some
pathways in their
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minds to solve
a complicated severe problem with the
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help
of these
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books
.
For example
, flying was a far unreachable dream for human for centuries which children can
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read
about it
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in
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fictional
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books
.
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reading
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these kind
of
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books
eventually
inspired two engineer brothers for going beyond their fear and try to face an experience that one day seems to be a joke.

Also
,
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fictional
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books
create a context for all
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people
to encourage them about writing. It triggers a joy and enthusiasm in readers that can assist them in their way of being great writers,
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because
text
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books
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only
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show
you the achievements of the others without leaving any question mark in their readers’
The verb 'minds' is used with the gerund form: "minds following".
minds to follow
their subject by themselves.
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Fictional
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books
on the other hand
bring a vast crafted world among your sight to observe it and even being part of it.

In conclusion
,
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people
spend
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a lot of
their time reading variety of
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books
during school or in universities and at work. These
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books
should coach your creativeness and innovation
besides
adding something new to your information.
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Fictional
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books
provide us with more information about a better life.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
reading those set of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
might be more beneficial than rough boring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
textbooks
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Fiction (such as short stories or novels) can teach us more about life than textbooks can”. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
428 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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