Extreme sports are believed to be more interesting than any other type of sports. However, some people think it's not even useful. Extreme forms of physical activities including sky diving and skiing are really hazardous and have to be forbidden. The Essay will argue why this is ultimately inaccurate.
Despite major benefits, forms of sports that involve huge risks to the player are very dangerous and should not be legally allowed. Because they can lead to severe injuries or even deaths. For instance, Japan has a rule allowing only professionals to use a parachute or even skate. In fact, many countries have totally banned these practices. Therefore, care should be taken before trying any of these insane experiences.
In contrast, being subjected to such a stressful situation where you could also have fun and enjoy the adrenaline rush could teach us a lot. In addition, it helps us to be brave and overcome our fears. For example, Jumping from a bridge is classified as one of the most interesting moments that one could ever experience. Moreover, jumping from a plane is even considered to be more breathtaking. Consequently, it is really important to try one of these experiences.
In conclusion, dangerous types of physical Exercise could be life-threatening and should be taken seriously. The Essay argued why this is completely preposterous. In my opinion, with appropriate care taken, it's an extremely useful thing that can teach us lessons that would have been otherwise impossible if we had only played tennis or football.
Extreme sports
are believed
to be more interesting than any other type of sports.
However
,
some
people
think
it's not even useful. Extreme forms of physical activities including
sky diving
and skiing are
really
hazardous and
have to
be forbidden
. The Essay will argue why this is
ultimately
inaccurate.
Despite major benefits, forms of sports that involve huge
risks
to the player are
very
dangerous
and should not be
legally
allowed
.
Because
they can lead to severe injuries or even deaths.
For instance
, Japan has a
rule
allowing
only
professionals to
use
a parachute or even skate. In fact,
many
countries have
totally
banned these practices.
Therefore
, care should
be taken
before
trying any of these insane experiences.
In contrast
,
being subjected
to such a stressful situation where you could
also
have fun and enjoy the adrenaline rush could teach us a lot.
In addition
, it
helps
us to be brave and overcome our fears.
For example
, Jumping from a bridge
is classified
as one of the most interesting moments that one could ever experience.
Moreover
, jumping from a
plane
is even considered to be more breathtaking.
Consequently
, it is
really
important
to try one of these experiences.
In conclusion
,
dangerous
types of physical Exercise could be life-threatening and should
be taken
seriously
. The Essay argued why this is completely preposterous. In my opinion, with appropriate care taken, it's an
extremely
useful thing that can teach us lessons that would have been
otherwise
impossible if we had
only
played tennis or football.
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