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Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue. v.1

Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue. v. 1
Issues related to animal experimentation are frequently discussed these days, particularly in the media. It is often said that animals should not be used in testing because it is cruel and unnecessary. This essay will examine the arguments for and against animal testing. I belong to a biology background and I strongly believe that animal testing is an essential and crucial part before releasing any product in the market. Pharmaceutical industries have to spend billions of dollars in research and development and it takes them years before the drug even reaches human testing. Without the testing on animals like mice and rabbits, it will be almost impossible to determine the effects and efficacy of the product on humans. Let’s look around us – from hair products to sunscreens to skin lightening creams to beard oils – every batch has gone through rigorous testing cycles before it was deemed suitable for use on humans. Let us ask ourselves this question: Would we buy any product on the market if we knew that it will cause an allergic reaction or may be fatal on application? The answer is very simple! Not one person would even touch these items and we would have no usable drugs/creams/lotions on the shelves. However, I do see the point of the group that is against animal testing. Organizations like PETA, seem to propagate -very vividly and graphically – the idea that animal testing is the cruelest thing ever. Animals are living creatures and we should not be subjecting them to tests for our profit. However, in arguments like this, one needs to weigh the pros and cons of the situation in a logical way. Although I am completely on board the idea that there definitely is an ethical conundrum surrounding animal testing, in my opinion, the pros of animal testing far outweigh the cons.
Issues related to
animal
experimentation are
frequently
discussed these days,
particularly
in the media. It is
often
said that
animals
should not be
used
in
testing
because
it is cruel and unnecessary. This essay will examine the arguments for and against
animal
testing.

I belong to a biology background and I
strongly
believe that
animal
testing
is an essential and crucial part
before
releasing any
product
in the market. Pharmaceutical industries
have to
spend billions of dollars in research and development and it takes them years
before
the drug even reaches human
testing
. Without the
testing
on
animals
like mice and rabbits, it will be almost impossible to determine the effects and efficacy of the
product
on humans.

Let
’s look around us
from hair
products
to sunscreens to skin lightening creams to beard oils
every batch has gone through rigorous
testing
cycles
before
it
was deemed
suitable for
use
on humans.
Let
us ask ourselves this question: Would we
buy
any
product
on the market if we knew that it will cause an allergic reaction or may be fatal on application? The answer is
very
simple! Not one person would even touch these
items and
we would have no usable drugs/creams/lotions on the shelves.

However
, I do
see
the point of the group
that is
against
animal
testing
. Organizations like PETA, seem to propagate -
very
vividly
and
graphically
the
idea
that
animal
testing
is the cruelest thing ever.
Animals
are living
creatures and
we should not be subjecting them to
tests
for our profit.

However
, in arguments like this, one needs to weigh the pros and cons of the situation
in a logical way
. Although I am completely on board the
idea
that there definitely is an ethical conundrum surrounding
animal
testing
, in my opinion, the pros of
animal
testing
far outweigh the cons.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
307 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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