Big Salary is much more important than job satisfaction. v.15
Big Salary is much more important than job satisfaction. v. 15
Currently, Job is one of the precious things in the society. It is believed that for an employee wages is really necessary than having a satisfying job. This essay agrees with the view that big payment is much more significant than Job satisfaction. Firstly, this essay will discuss the responsibility of a family to carry the large amount of payment is really necessary and secondly, will criticize in a desirable Job often salary is low.
It is evident that in present day enough money is indispensable for living a hassle free life. At times come when every man has to take his family's duty. Besides, all people has his own needs to accomplish where money is most needed. For example, sometimes a person sacrifice he wants for money. Therefore, sufficient or big amount of salary really needed.
However, many persons get a job they wish. But often their claims that they are not getting big salaries while there are some other kind of job that they earn more. For instance, in Canada from a research they got that from 75% of employee 33% are paying a low salary in their satisfactory Job. So, people will do what is necessary for them.
In conclusion, it seems that a large amount of salary is really essential than a satisfactory Job. Furthermore, to live a happy life sufficient money is most needed.
Currently
,
Job
is one of the precious things in the society. It
is believed
that for an employee wages is
really
necessary
than having a satisfying
job
. This essay
agrees
with the view that
big
payment is much more significant than
Job
satisfaction.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss the responsibility of a family to carry the large amount of payment is
really
necessary and
secondly
, will criticize in a desirable
Job
often
salary
is low.
It is evident that in present day
enough
money
is indispensable for living a hassle free life. At times
come
when every
man
has to
take his family's duty.
Besides
, all
people
has
his
own
needs to accomplish where
money
is most needed.
For example
,
sometimes
a person sacrifice he wants for
money
.
Therefore
, sufficient or
big
amount of
salary
really
needed.
However
,
many
persons
get
a
job
they wish.
But
often
their claims that they are not getting
big
salaries
while there are
some
other
kind
of
job
that they earn more.
For instance
, in Canada from a research they
got
that from 75% of employee 33% are paying a low
salary
in their satisfactory
Job
.
So
,
people
will do what is necessary for them.
In conclusion
, it seems that a large amount of
salary
is
really
essential
than a satisfactory
Job
.
Furthermore
, to
live
a happy life sufficient
money
is most needed.
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21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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