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Everyone should eat vegetarian food because they do not meat to have a healthy life. Do you agree or disagree? v.2

Everyone should eat vegetarian food because they do not meat to have a healthy life. v. 2
Food is one of the basic necessities for humans to survive. There are mainly two types of foodstuff namely vegetarian and non-vegetarian. Some people, nowadays, prefer to consume non-vegetarian food. However, in certain people' s perception, intake of vegetarian food is more prominent in order to live a healthy life. This essay will discuss as to why everyone should ingest vegan. There are two major reasons why a person should have vegetarian food as their meals. Predominantly, the human body needs a plethora of nutrients for a healthy survival, and plant-based foods comprise of grains, fruits, vegetables, et cetera, which are packed with nutrients and are free from saturated fats. While, most of the non-vegan food contains high levels of proteins, fats, omega 3 acids, the indispensable nutrients like carbohydrates, proteins, fats, sugar forms the constituents with appropriate quantity in vegan; providing proper balanced diet to humans. For instance, in non-veg foods, the carbohydrates are absent whereas saturated sugars are present, making it less suitable for maintaining a healthy diet. Thus, vegetarian food contains all the basic nutrients required to be well-being. Secondly, a plethora of diseases are linked with non-vegetarian foods; which might be harmful for individuals and cannot be cured. however, only minor infections can be caused by vegan rarely, excepting life threatening ones. For example, in 2014, a disease called Swine Flu, was spreading widely among people consuming chicken and when experimented, it was found to be caused by unhealthy and diseased hens. The treatment worked only in few cases while others died even after proper treatment. That is why; non-vegetarian food can make a person seriously ill. In conclusion, this essay discussed why vegetarian food is more preferable to eat. In my opinion, one should ingest only veg food in order to live healthy and free from fatal diseases.
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Food
is one of the
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basic necessities
for humans to survive. There are
mainly
two types of foodstuff
namely
vegetarian and non-vegetarian.
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Some
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people
, nowadays, prefer to consume non-vegetarian
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food
.
However
, in certain
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people&
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food
is more prominent in order to
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live
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healthy
life. This essay will discuss as to why everyone should ingest vegan.

There are two major reasons why a person should have vegetarian
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food
as their meals.
Predominantly
, the human body needs a plethora of
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nutrients
for a
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healthy
survival, and plant-based
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foods
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comprise of
grains, fruits, vegetables,
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et cetera
, which
are packed
with
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nutrients
and are free from saturated fats. While, most of the non-vegan
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food
contains high levels of proteins, fats, omega 3 acids, the indispensable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nutrients
like carbohydrates, proteins, fats, sugar forms the constituents with appropriate quantity in vegan; providing proper balanced diet to humans.
For instance
, in non-veg
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foods
, the carbohydrates are absent whereas saturated sugars are present, making it less suitable for maintaining a
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healthy
diet.
Thus
, vegetarian
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food
contains all the basic
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nutrients
required to be well-being.

Secondly
, a plethora of diseases
are linked
with non-vegetarian
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foods
; which might be harmful for individuals and cannot
be cured
.
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however
,
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only
minor infections can
be caused
by vegan rarely, excepting life threatening ones.
For example
, in 2014, a disease called Swine Flu, was spreading
widely
among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
consuming chicken and when experimented, it
was found
to
be caused
by unhealthy and diseased hens. The treatment worked
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only
in few cases while others
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died
even after proper treatment.
That is
why; non-vegetarian
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food
can
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make
a person
seriously
ill.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed why vegetarian
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food
is more preferable to eat. In my opinion, one should ingest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
veg
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food
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
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healthy
and free from fatal diseases.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Everyone should eat vegetarian food because they do not meat to have a healthy life. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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