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Human beings do not need to eat meal in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and substitute vegetarian diet is as healthy as diet containing meat argue for or against the opinion above. v.2

Human beings do not need to eat meal in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and substitute vegetarian diet is as healthy as diet containing meat argue for or against the opinion above. v. 2
Good health is boost up energy of humanity for hardworking. If, health is wealthier so, human beings easily grow up in the environment. I argued that a vegetarian nutrients is healthy and dietary food has played crucial role to keep up health as contrast to non vegetarian food sources. To begin with, the vegetarian food are rich in protein, carbohydrates and so on. The dietary product has categorised in energy building food. If, people have been eat milk green leafy veggies than meat product so, it is plethora of beneficial for mankind. Furthermore, protein rich food and fibre food have been proper nourishment Osborn baby and pregnancy woman. In addition to this, in the modern scenario, a numerous critical diseases has occur in the environment. A mankind eat different sort of fruits and vet feel is better whether, eat a non vegetarian product which is also have bad impact on human health because meat food is responsible for incline sever illness. The best epitome of this is the Hindustan times conducted survey by health organization four out of ten people suffered from swin- flu disease to ate a meat of pig animal. Moreover, the balanced diet of vegetarian food broccoli has similar vitamin as meat. According to doctor, human will eat broccoli which is less fat content and it is controlled various disease such as high blood pressure as well as cholesterol. To conclude, a good balanced dietary food has play significant role to cure illness so, eat a lot of dietary veggies and fruits for good healthier body. Everyone say that health is wealth.
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is boost up energy of humanity for hardworking. If,
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health
is wealthier
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so
, human beings
easily
grow up in the environment. I argued that a vegetarian
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nutrients
is healthy and dietary
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food
has played crucial role to
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keep
up
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health
as contrast to
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non vegetarian
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food
sources.

To
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begin
with, the vegetarian
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food
are rich in protein, carbohydrates and
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on. The dietary product has
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categorised
in energy building
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food
. If,
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people
have been
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eat
milk green leafy veggies than
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meat
product
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so
, it is plethora of beneficial for mankind.
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, protein rich
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food
and
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fibre
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have been proper nourishment Osborn baby and pregnancy woman.

In addition
to this, in the modern scenario, a numerous critical
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diseases
has
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in the environment. A mankind
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eat
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different
sort of fruits and vet feel is better whether,
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a
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non vegetarian
product which is
also
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have
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bad
impact on human
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health
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because
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meat
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food
is responsible for incline sever illness. The best epitome of this is the Hindustan times conducted survey by
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health
organization four out of ten
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people
suffered from
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swin
- flu disease to ate a
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meat
of pig animal.
Moreover
, the balanced diet of vegetarian
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food
broccoli has similar vitamin as
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meat
. According to doctor, human will
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eat
broccoli which is less
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fat
content and it
is controlled
various disease such as high blood pressure
as well
as cholesterol.

To conclude
, a
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good
balanced dietary
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food
has play significant role to cure illness
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,
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eat
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a lot of
dietary veggies and fruits for
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healthier body. Everyone
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say
that
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is wealth.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS essay Human beings do not need to eat meal in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and substitute vegetarian diet is as healthy as diet containing meat argue for or against the opinion above. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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