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Some people think that printed books are not necessary i the digital area because all writings can be stored electronically. Others think printed books play important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.2

Some people think that printed books are not necessary i the digital area because all writings can be stored electronically. Others think printed books play important role. v. 2
In our society nowadays, a role of books is becoming more and more essential. Recently there are some arguments whether books should be printed to read or not? This issue has both a negative and positive aspects which will be discusses in this essay before my own perspective is given. Regard to e-book, it is more convenient then printed book because of many factors. It is clear that readers are able to enjoy their books by high-tech devices, especially smart phone. Nowadays, technological advances alter some habits of human and reading published books is not unaccepted. It is exemplified that people are curious about downloaded their favorite books from the internet to their smart phone ant it is mobile for them to read with a simplicity. To conclude, should they not read books by electrical devices, it will be sophisticated to bring heavy printed books day in day out. As far as published book, that of price is more exorbitant as many times as e-book precisely. There are many reasons cause that issue but the most vital reason is paper’s consuming. For example, Cambridge Ielts test books, which student buy at bookstores, are spent a large amount of money; whereas, student would like to be economical by downloading e-books from some Ietls pages for free. Consequently, should readers purchase printed books too much, they will pay an enormous expense of reading. In conclusion, although using electronic book has some detrimental effects, readers should replace printed book with e-book to be regarded as an effective way to be thrifty.
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books
is becoming more and more essential. Recently there are
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some
arguments whether
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books
should be
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printed
to read or not? This issue has both a
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negative
and
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positive
aspects which will be discusses in this essay
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perspective is
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printed
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book
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because
of
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factors. It is
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that readers are able to enjoy their
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books
by high-tech devices,
especially
smart phone. Nowadays, technological advances alter
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some
habits of human and reading published
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books
is not unaccepted. It
is exemplified
that
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people
are curious about downloaded their favorite
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books
from the internet to their smart phone ant it is mobile for them to read with a simplicity.
To conclude
, should they not read
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books
by electrical devices, it will
be sophisticated
to bring heavy
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printed
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books
day in day out.

As far as published
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book
, that of price is more exorbitant as
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many
times as e-book
precisely
. There are
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reasons cause that issue
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the most vital reason is paper’s consuming.
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test
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books
, which student
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buy
at bookstores,
are spent
a large amount of money; whereas, student would like to be economical by downloading e-books from
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some
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pages for free.
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purchase
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printed
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too much, they will pay an enormous expense of reading.

In conclusion
, although using electronic
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book
has
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some
detrimental effects, readers should replace
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printed
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book
with e-book to
be regarded
as an effective way to be thrifty.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that printed books are not necessary i the digital area because all writings can be stored electronically. Others think printed books play important role. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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