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Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables they are worth the extra cost. v.2

Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables they are worth the extra cost. v. 2
Organic fruits and vegetables cost more than conventional fruits and vegetables but many people are willing to pay the higher price to get the organic ones. In my opinion, it is worth paying more for these organic products because it is natural and safe. Genetically modified fruits and vegetables have more pesticides and chemicals added that could be harmful to our health. The two key reasons why organic products are the best are they have fewer pesticides and more nutrients. The conventional fruits and vegetables look more convincing in the stores. It is usually cheaper and good looking that catches buyers. While organic fruits are sad looking which have holes and spots or rotten part, they offer better food value. Sometimes they look wrinkled and shrivelled. However, organic fruits and vegetables produce higher levels of nutrients than conventional counterparts. Furthermore, it produces more antioxidant compound linked to better health. Eating fresh organic fruits and vegetables are more nutritious and tasty. No need to settle for less if it is better than commercially grown fruits and vegetables. Moreover, exposure to pesticides from conventional products has some health effect such as risks of cancer, nervous system diseases and reproductive problems. Pesticides can be absorbed into fruits and vegetables and leave trace residues that could have toxic effects on humans. Another thing aside from harmful effects, it has also environmental effects. Chemical pesticides are known to pollute the environment. With several potentially harmful effects on health and environment, the cost will be more likely to double for hospitalisation. Therefore, organic fruits and vegetables are much better than conventional fruits and vegetables. They are worth an extra cost for the health benefits we could get in fewer pesticides fruits and vegetables.
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ones. In my opinion, it is worth paying more for these
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organic
products
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because
it is natural and safe.
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modified
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fruits
and
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vegetables
have more
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pesticides
and chemicals
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added
that could be harmful to our
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health
. The two key reasons why
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organic
products are the best are they have fewer
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pesticides
and more nutrients.

The
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conventional
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fruits
and
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vegetables
look more convincing in the stores. It is
usually
cheaper and
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good looking
that catches buyers. While
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organic
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fruits
are sad looking which have holes and spots or rotten part, they offer
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better
food value.
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they look wrinkled and shrivelled.
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,
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organic
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and
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produce higher levels of nutrients than
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conventional
counterparts.
Furthermore
, it produces more antioxidant compound linked to
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better
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health
. Eating fresh
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organic
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fruits
and
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vegetables
are more nutritious and tasty. No need to settle for less if it is
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better
than
commercially
grown
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fruits
and vegetables.

Moreover
, exposure to
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pesticides
from
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conventional
products has
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some
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health
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effect
such as
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risks
of cancer, nervous system diseases and reproductive problems.
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can
be absorbed
into
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fruits
and
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and
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leave
trace residues that could have toxic effects on humans. Another thing aside from harmful effects, it has
also
environmental effects. Chemical
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pesticides
are known
to pollute the environment. With several
potentially
harmful effects on
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health
and environment, the cost will be more likely to double for
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hospitalisation
.

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,
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organic
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and
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vegetables
are much
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better
than
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conventional
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and
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. They are worth an extra cost for the
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health
benefits we could
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get
in fewer
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pesticides
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fruits
and
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vegetables
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
51Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables they are worth the extra cost. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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