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Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree. v.1

Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost. v. 1
Organic fruits and vegetables are becoming more and more popular because they are healthier. Organic crops are grown without the application of chemical fertilizers and pesticides. As a result they taste better and contain more nutrients. Therefore, I agree with the argument that organic foods their higher price tags. To start with, the cultivation of organic crops requires more time and effort. Since this kind of farming does not permit the use of synthetic fertilizers or pesticides, organic crops have increased risk of getting damaged by pests and weeds. By contrast, conventional farmers use chemical fertilizers and pesticides abundantly. As a result, they get much better yields and can sell their products at a low price. Since it is not easy to grow organic fruits and vegetables on a commercial basis, they are more expensive than regular crops. However, their quality justifies their higher price. Organic products are safe and healthy. Dangerous levels of pesticides are found in crops grown using the traditional method. People who consume such foods on a prolonged basis have increased risk of developing health problems like cancer. It is true that pesticides increased yield but they also led to a variety of diseases. As a result there is now growing awareness against the use of pesticides. Prevention is better than cure. By switching to organic foods people can reduce their risk for cancer and other diseases to a great extent. In other words, by spending a little bit more today, people can save much more on their hospital bills in the future. What’s more, if more people start using organic foods, then more farmers will adopt this method of cultivation and prices will eventually come down. To conclude, the nutritional value and health benefits of organic foods completely justify their increased price. I hope the government will support organic crops and facilitate their commercial cultivation.
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fruits and vegetables are becoming more and more popular
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because
they are healthier.
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crops
are grown
without the application of chemical fertilizers and
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pesticides
.
As a result
they taste better and contain more nutrients.
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, I
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with the argument that
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foods
their higher
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price
tags.

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start
with, the cultivation of
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organic
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crops
requires more time and effort. Since this kind of farming does not permit the
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use
of synthetic fertilizers or
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pesticides
,
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organic
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crops
have
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increased
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risk
of getting damaged by pests and weeds. By contrast, conventional farmers
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use
chemical fertilizers and
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pesticides
abundantly
.
As a result
, they
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get
much better yields and can sell their products at a low
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price
. Since it is not easy to grow
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organic
fruits and vegetables on a commercial basis, they are more expensive than regular
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crops
.
However
, their quality justifies their higher price.

Organic products are safe and healthy.
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levels of
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pesticides
are found
in
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crops
grown using the traditional method.
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People
who consume such
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foods
on a prolonged basis have
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increased
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risk
of developing health problems like cancer. It is true that
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pesticides
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increased
yield
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also
led to a variety of diseases.
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growing awareness against the
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use
of
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pesticides
. Prevention is better than cure. By switching to
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organic
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foods
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people
can
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reduce
their
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for cancer and other diseases to a great extent.
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more
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people
can save much more on their hospital bills in the future. What’s more, if more
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people
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start
using
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organic
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foods
, then more farmers will adopt this method of cultivation and
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prices
will
eventually
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come
down.

To conclude
, the nutritional value and health benefits of
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organic
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foods
completely justify their
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increased
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price
. I hope the
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government
will support
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organic
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crops
and facilitate their commercial cultivation.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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