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Essay topics: TPO-42 - Independent Writing TaskWorkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

Essay topics: TPO-42 - Independent Writing TaskWorkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
There are certain considerations of factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine employees' satisfaction with activities which they are doing at a workplace. I certainly believe that workers shouldn' t do similar tasks all day long. Someone can conspicuously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The reasons on which my stance is based are discussed in details below. Firstly, the most glaring and obvious negative consequences of fulfilling the same task all day long is that workers will inevitably become bored with it and a person who is fed up with the job will be unavoidably disappointed with his life as well. In fact, it is natural for us to be engaged in many types of activities and absence of stimulation which is associated with monotonous jobs has a soporific effect on human beings. In other words, doing the same task or similar assignments for a long period of time is merely unnatural for us. Secondly, one of the main characteristics of the humankind is curiously or a necessity to get new skills and information. Unfortunately, doing similar task will surely take from us the possibility to learn something new at workplace. As a result, the employee who works, for instance, at an assembly line feels himself unsatisfied and even unworthy. By contrast, a worker who has an opportunity to try something novel will be able to meet his need in learning and thus his prospect on a life will be promising and positive. Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that doing similar activities has some advantages. Chiefly, it may satisfy the employee because one will refine his performance with practice; however, there is a high likelihood that the worker will lose one' s concentration on the task doing and as a result one might begin to do mistakes and even cause damage to the business. Under such circumstances it is unreasonable to expect that the discussed employee will feel satisfaction. Besides, a person who does a wide variety of tasks may improve performance by using skills which were developed for implementation different tasks for doing a new assignment. Due to aforementioned ground, all workers ought to be engaged in doing a variety of distinct activities because it is beneficial for their self-esteem and bring satisfaction with their job.
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workers
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shouldn&
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tasks
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negative
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task
all day long is that
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workers
will
inevitably
become bored with it and a person
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who
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up with the job will be
unavoidably
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be engaged
in
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many
types of
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activities
and absence of stimulation which
is associated
with monotonous jobs has a soporific effect on human beings.
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,
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doing
the same
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task
or
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similar
assignments for a long period of time is
merely
unnatural for us.

Secondly
, one of the main characteristics of the humankind is
curiously
or a necessity to
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get
new
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skills
and information. Unfortunately,
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doing
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similar
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task
will
surely
take from us the possibility to learn something new at workplace.
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, the
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employee
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who
works,
for instance
, at an assembly line feels himself unsatisfied and even unworthy. By contrast, a
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worker
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who
has an opportunity to try something novel will be able to
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meet
his need in learning and
thus
his prospect on a life will be promising and
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positive
.

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, there are
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some
justifications by one
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argues that
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activities
has
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some
advantages.
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, it may satisfy the
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employee
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because
one will refine his performance with practice;
however
, there is a high likelihood that the
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worker
will lose
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task
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doing
and
as a result
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begin
to do mistakes and even cause damage to the business. Under such circumstances it is unreasonable to
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expect
that the discussed
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employee
will feel satisfaction.
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, a person
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who
does a wide variety of
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tasks
may
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improve
performance by using
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skills
which
were developed
for implementation
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different
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tasks
for
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doing
a new assignment.

Due to aforementioned ground, all
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workers
ought to
be engaged
in
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doing
a variety of distinct
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activities
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because
it is beneficial for their self-esteem and bring satisfaction with their job.
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IELTS essay Essay topics: TPO-42 - Independent Writing TaskWorkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
388 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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