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Essay topics: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant v.1

Essay topics: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
It is undeniable that the work environment has been changing at a fast pace. People often tend to alter their jobs and do not want to depend completely on one job. The main cause behind this is globalization and a possible solution would be holding a qualified degree and keep themselves up to date with the latest technology. One of the fundamental reasons for switching a job frequently is globalization. This is because many Multinational Companies offer good job prospects to employees with a hefty salary, which enables them to leave the old job and grab a new job. For example, the recent report in the Guardian newspaper of the UK in January 2018 revealed that since last decade 58% of employees have shifted considerably to a new job in order to have a decent salary and this results in improvisation in their standard of living. One plausible solution to stick with one company instead of changing is being updated with new technology and highly qualified. Since many companies look for workers who are tech-savvy and possess good communication skills and hold master degree, employees ought to possess these skills so as to stay longer in the same job. For example, the Google renowned company select those employees who are versatile and have up to date knowledge of technology, resulting in they are satisfied and content with their jobs and do not shift to another company. In conclusion, it is irrefutable that the work scenario is constantly changing, ever before due to globalization. Only when employees are tech-savvy or hold a qualified degree, will this problem be solved.
It is undeniable that the work environment has been changing at a
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fast
pace.
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People
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often
tend to alter their
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jobs
and do not want to depend completely on one
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job
. The main cause behind this is globalization and a possible solution would be holding a qualified degree and
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keep
themselves up to date with the latest technology.

One of the fundamental reasons for switching a
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job
frequently
is globalization. This is
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because
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many
Multinational
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Companies
offer
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good
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job
prospects to
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employees
with a hefty salary, which enables them to
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leave
the
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old
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job
and grab a new
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job
.
For example
, the recent report in the Guardian newspaper of the UK in January 2018 revealed that since last decade 58% of
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employees
have shifted
considerably
to a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
in order to have a decent salary and this results in improvisation in their standard of living.

One plausible solution to stick with one
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company
instead
of changing is
being updated
with new technology and
highly
qualified. Since
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many
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companies
look for workers who are tech-savvy and possess
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good
communication
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skills
and hold master degree,
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employees
ought to possess these
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skills
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
stay longer in the same
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job
.
For example
, the Google renowned
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company
select those
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employees
who are versatile and have up to date knowledge of technology, resulting in they
are satisfied
and content with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jobs
and do not shift to another
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

In conclusion
, it is irrefutable that the work scenario is
constantly
changing, ever
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before
due to globalization.
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Only
when
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employees
are tech-savvy or hold a qualified degree, will this problem
be solved
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Essay topics: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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