After 2 century figure of transportation is escalated enormously, for this reason another media for communication is searching globally as well as different types of rules and regulations are taken for controlling the car. I agree with these measures because by following these our environment will be able to reduce pollution, and traffic jam can be controlled through this.
By emitting carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide from transit our surroundings become polluted and it causes some deleterious effect for human beings. With the increasing of population, public transportation is necessary for everyone, as a result, the figure is growing day by day and they produce black smoke which is the main reason of increasing carbon and thus global warming is occurring and the world runs towards the danger zone such as the ice are melting as a consequence, low lying area is drawing.
If the number of private jeep is rising rapidly trafficking will be increased more, although public transport like bus, truck also fall significant influence on traffic jam. The price of motor becomes reasonable for the person who have money, moreover automobile can be purchased by instalments for this person can easily adopt car and the number is increasing. However, some car owners break traffic rules and some terrible accident occurs, on the other hand, for the jam people lost their valuable time which can cause economic loss of that country. If some strict rules are announced such type accident will be reduced furthermore people can use train, tram and such type public transit instead of using convertible.
In conclusion, I support this types of decisions for improving our quality of life and saving our whole world.
After
2 century
figure of transportation
is escalated
enormously
,
for this reason
another media for communication is searching globally
as well
as
different
types
of
rules
and regulations
are taken
for controlling the car. I
agree
with these measures
because
by following
these our environment
will be able to
reduce
pollution, and traffic jam can
be controlled
through this.
By emitting carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide from transit our surroundings become polluted and it causes
some
deleterious effect for human beings. With the increasing of population, public transportation is necessary for everyone,
as a result
, the figure is growing day by
day and
they produce black smoke which is the main reason of increasing carbon and
thus
global warming is occurring and the world runs towards the
danger
zone such as the ice are melting as a consequence,
low lying
area is drawing.
If the number of private jeep is rising
rapidly
trafficking will
be increased
more, although public transport like bus, truck
also
fall significant influence on traffic jam. The price of motor becomes reasonable for the person who have money,
moreover
automobile can be
purchased
by
instalments
for this person can
easily
adopt car and the number is increasing.
However
,
some
car owners break traffic
rules
and
some
terrible accident occurs,
on the other hand
, for the jam
people
lost their valuable time which can cause economic loss of that country. If
some
strict
rules
are announced
such
type
accident will be
reduced
furthermore
people
can
use
train, tram and such
type
public transit
instead
of using convertible.
In conclusion
, I support this
types
of decisions for improving our quality of life and saving our whole world.
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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