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Education is sometime considered as something for the youth. Some People however, consider as lifelong task. What is your opinion? Give reason and support your ideas with specific support v.2

Education is sometime considered as something for the youth. Some People however, consider as lifelong task. What is your opinion? Give reason and support your ideas with specific support v. 2
Undoubtedly, Education is the peerless thing in this globe for making people’s life fruitful. However, certain people think it is for only to youth, but, in this fast pace world, it is pivotal thing beyond the age limit and the reasons are summarized below. First and foremost, according to the study, indeed, it is partaking the major role on masses life through dictating their way of living standard, and prominent yard stick to esteem the individuality. Further more, the advent of new technology seduces the people to know about the unanimous things to retain their existing stance in this competitive community beyond the age limit, because, the new things will not be wait for anyone, then to originate this precious life to shine, it is essential should be an up to date. Besides, it is regard as the significant thing to evaluate the people’s reputation and reverence from the others. After all, in the present scenario, it is impossible without know about the technology and new things. For instance, the famous news paper Hindu, yesterday published the article on how the past generation people confront the problem of lacking knowledge in new developments, which is near to 30 percent and illustrated how it separates them from this society. On the other hand, it is deniable face that education should be for youth, because, this is the appropriate age to assimilate everything. But their childhood onwards, they are started to learn about their circumstance like How live, speak and so on. These are also the kind of learning. So, education is the life long task till the upshot people will learn new things without their knowledge by the coercion of this society’s standard. To sum up this, it seems to me that learning the new skills is the infinite task to people, who want to live the victorious life beyond the age limit, so, age is not the obstacle to study.
Undoubtedly
, Education is the peerless thing in this globe for making
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people’s
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life
fruitful.
However
, certain
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people
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think
it is for
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only
to youth,
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but
, in this
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fast
pace world, it
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is pivotal
thing beyond the
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age
limit and the reasons
are summarized
below.

First
and foremost, according to the study,
indeed
, it is partaking the major role on masses
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life
through dictating their way of living standard, and prominent yard stick to esteem the individuality.
Further
more, the advent of
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new
technology seduces the
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people
to know about the unanimous things to retain their existing stance in this competitive community beyond the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
limit,
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because
, the
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new
things will not be wait for anyone, then to originate this precious
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life
to shine, it is essential should be an up to date.
Besides
, it is regard as the significant thing to evaluate the
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people’s
reputation and reverence from the others.
After all
, in the present scenario, it is impossible without know about the technology and
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new
things.
For instance
, the
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famous
This word is normally spelled as one.
news paper
Hindu, yesterday published the article on how the past generation
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people
confront the problem of lacking knowledge in
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new
developments, which is near to 30 percent and illustrated how it separates them from this society.

On the other hand
, it is deniable face that education should be for youth,
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because
, this is the appropriate
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age
to assimilate everything.
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But
their childhood onwards, they are
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started
to learn about their circumstance like How
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live
, speak and
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so
on. These are
also
the kind of learning.
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So
, education is the
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life
long task till the upshot
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people
will learn
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new
things without their knowledge by the coercion of this society’s standard.

To sum up this, it seems to me that learning the
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new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
is the infinite task to
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people
, who want to
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live
the victorious
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life
beyond the
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age
limit,
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so
,
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age
is not the obstacle to study.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Education is sometime considered as something for the youth. Some People however, consider as lifelong task. What is your opinion? Give reason and support your ideas with specific support v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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