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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.6

Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 6
Education gives us a knowledge of the world around us and changes it into something better. It develops a perspective in us of looking at life differently. It is often argued that studies from elementary school through college should be free of cost and federal or either provincial government pay for their students. I completely agree with this opinion and, think that it will help more children get the literacy. First of all, I believe that if the ministry agrees to pay the tuition for the students, especially for those who cannot afford even basic learning will benefit them to grain knowledge. And, finally be able to live a normal life, instead of getting into trouble or bad company and commit crimes. Moreover, this approach will be beneficial for students and their families get rid of education loans. For instance, according to the American Center of Progress report on the Student Debt Crisis within the past three decades the debt has reached over $1. 5 trillion. Thus, if the government use this money as to pay their fees instead of lend it to the person actively learning, it will no longer be able to crush the younger generation. Another point to consider, it will provide greater opportunities like to choose a major of your own choice or the subject you enjoy the most. And, in this way more and more kids will be able to study in their field of choice and as a nation, we'll get more and more educated people make their countries better and better. For example, in India most of the students who have ambitions to become a doctor, but are not able to fulfil their dreams. Because, to become a doctor it is so much more costly in India and that is why students choose to go into different fields in which they have zero interest. In conclusion, society benefits tremendously by offering its citizens free studies. While the government need not subsidize some highly profitable professions, the general benefit of a fully funded education should be extended to all.
Education gives us a knowledge of the world around us and
changes
it into something better. It develops a perspective in us of looking at life
differently
. It is
often
argued that studies from elementary school through college should be free of cost and federal or either provincial
government
pay for their
students
. I completely
agree
with this opinion and,
think
that it will
help
more children
get
the literacy.

First of all
, I believe that if the ministry
agrees
to pay the tuition for the
students
,
especially
for those who cannot afford even basic learning will benefit them to grain knowledge. And,
finally
be
able
to
live
a normal life,
instead
of getting into trouble or
bad
company
and commit crimes.
Moreover
, this approach will be beneficial for
students
and their families
get
rid of education loans.
For instance
, according to the American Center of Progress report on the
Student
Debt Crisis within the past three decades the debt has reached over $1. 5 trillion.
Thus
, if the
government
use
this money as to pay their fees
instead
of lend it to the person
actively
learning, it will no longer be
able
to crush the younger generation.

Another point to consider, it will provide greater opportunities like to choose a major of your
own
choice or the subject you enjoy the most. And, in this way more and more kids will be
able
to study in their field of choice and as a nation, we'll
get
more and more educated
people
make
their countries better and better.
For example
, in India most of the
students
who have ambitions to become a doctor,
but
are not
able
to fulfil their dreams.
Because
, to become a doctor it is
so
much more costly in India and
that is
why
students
choose to go into
different
fields in which they have zero interest.

In conclusion
, society benefits
tremendously
by offering its citizens free studies. While the
government
need not subsidize
some
highly
profitable professions, the general benefit of a
fully
funded education should
be extended
to all.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
345 words
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