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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 4
With regard to the high speed of technological advancement and the popularity of digital information, it is conceivable that they will replace with conventional sources of news or books. In my opinion, this hypothesis might be happening based on two primary reasons. It is an indisputable fact that the digital technologies, in particular E-books, have revolutionized the process of finding and reading books. In the earlier times, finding a certain book entailed long hours searching library shelves or looking for in a various types of bookshops. Now, however, the same book not only can be easily accessed at the click of a button, but also can be read or listened in any situation. In addition, since pdf resources are more affordable and take up really less space, anyone can have this chance to possess their own individual library with their favourite books as well as to carry it anywhere just on a portable, lightweight device. Furthermore, online websites have provided an appropriate opportunity to release news swiftly and easily as well. Before innovation the internet, people must wait to be informed news, at least one day because traditional newspapers published daily. Nowadays, whereas, online sources of news are updated every moment so that people can read a vast amount of information ranging from political to entertaining the instant they are uploaded. In conclusion, I believe that E-books and other advanced digital technologies are great alternatives to the printed ones owing to the advantages mentioned above. Therefore, it is thoroughly possible they will totally take the place of conventional publications in the near future.
With regard to the high speed of technological advancement and the popularity of digital information, it is conceivable that they will replace with conventional sources of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. In my opinion, this hypothesis might be happening based on two primary reasons.

It is an indisputable fact that the digital technologies,
in particular
E-books, have revolutionized the process of finding and reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. In the earlier times, finding a certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
entailed long hours searching library shelves or looking for in a various
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "type"?
types
of bookshops.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
,
however
, the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
can be
easily
accessed at the click of a button,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
can
be read
or listened in any situation.
In addition
, since
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pdf
resources are more affordable and take up
really
less space, anyone can have this chance to possess their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
individual library with their
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favourite
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books
as well
as to carry it anywhere
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
on a portable, lightweight device.

Furthermore
, online websites have provided an appropriate opportunity to release
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
swiftly
and
easily
as well
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
innovation the internet,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
wait to
be informed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
, at least one day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
traditional newspapers published daily. Nowadays, whereas, online sources of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
are updated
every moment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can read a vast amount of information ranging from political to entertaining the instant they
are uploaded
.

In conclusion
, I believe that E-books and other advanced digital technologies are great alternatives to the printed ones owing to the advantages mentioned above.
Therefore
, it is
thoroughly
possible they will
totally
take the place of conventional publications in the near future.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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