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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were childrenUse specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.1

: Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were childrenUse specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1
In this contemporary and conventional era, flora and fauna play a crucial role in nature because the Eco cycle of the world depends on it. A fair amount of masses asserts that experiment on animals is cruel. On the contrary, it is fruitful for the development of science and the public. This essay will parcel agree and discuss the viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs with a reasonable conclusion. To begin with, the use of animals such as rats and rabbits for experiments is an unfair and painful process because animals are speechless and innocent and have an equal right to live freely. In addition to this, imprisoning animals for experiments is an injustice to their freedom as it is against their own will and sometimes, while setting themselves free, animals die on the table. In any case, they suffer from immense pain. On the other hand, research on animals is inevitable for the progress of Medical Science. For instance, according to the survey of "World Health Organisation" which shows that 90% of drugs are tested on animals because if the drugs will directly dispatch for use of human being then it may cause death or disability in a human's body. Hence, they are important for the development of various aspects of science such as biology, pharmacology, pharmacovigillance and many more. In conclusion, experiments on animals are indeed very imperative for scientists serve mankind and animals in harmony. Science has also developed myriad vaccines for the safety of animals by experimenting on them.
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because
the Eco cycle of the world depends on it. A
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fair
amount of masses asserts that
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experiment
on
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animals
is cruel.
On the contrary
, it is fruitful for the development of
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science
and the public. This essay will parcel
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agree
and discuss the viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs with a reasonable conclusion.

To
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begin
with, the
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use
of
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animals
such as rats and rabbits for
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experiments
is an unfair and painful process
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because
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animals
are speechless and innocent and have an equal right to
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live
freely
.
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to this, imprisoning
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animals
for
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experiments
is an injustice to their freedom as it is against their
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own
will and
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sometimes
, while setting themselves free,
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animals
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die
on the table. In any case, they suffer from immense pain.

On the other hand
, research on
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animals
is inevitable for the progress of Medical
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Science
.
For instance
, according to the survey of
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World Health
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which
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shows
that 90% of drugs are
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tested
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animals
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because
if the drugs will
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use
of human being then it may cause death or disability in a human's body.
Hence
, they are
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important
for the development of various aspects of
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science
such as biology, pharmacology,
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pharmacovigillance
and
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many
more.

In conclusion
,
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experiments
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are
indeed
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very
imperative for scientists serve mankind and
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animals
in harmony.
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Science
has
also
developed myriad vaccines for the safety of
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animals
by experimenting on them.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay : Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were childrenUse specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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