Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. v.3
Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. v. 3
Sample” survey of India in 2015, people had to spend more than one-third of their wages on health care and schooling. In a developing country, it is quite hard for citizens to manage it all by their own, especially since education and treatment are getting expensive these days. These should be free as poor people cannot afford the higher education and good health care system. Moreover, if the government provides free education, the literacy rate will surely increase and the citizens would contribute far better to the overall development of the country. So, in this way, the economy of that country will flourish day by day.
In addition, another recent survey in India shows that almost 32% people die every year without proper treatment because they are poor. Furthermore, a healthy nation is the base of an industrial nation and it is a government's responsibility to make the proper medical treatment and service available for all.
In conclusion, if education and medical facility are provided by the government for free to its citizens, then a country will get more benefits from it. Education and healthy life are two basic needs of every citizen and a government is in fact, formed to make sure no citizen is deprived of his basic needs.
Sample” survey of India in 2015,
people
had to spend more than one-third of their wages on health care and schooling. In a developing
country
, it is quite
hard
for
citizens
to manage it all by their
own
,
especially
since
education
and treatment are getting expensive these days. These should be free as poor
people
cannot afford the higher
education
and
good
health care system.
Moreover
, if the
government
provides free
education
, the literacy rate will
surely
increase and the
citizens
would contribute far better to the
overall
development of the
country
.
So
, in this way, the economy of that
country
will flourish day by day.
In addition
, another recent survey in India
shows
that almost 32%
people
die
every year without proper treatment
because
they are poor.
Furthermore
, a healthy nation is the base of an industrial nation and it is a
government
's responsibility to
make
the proper medical treatment and service available for all.
In conclusion
, if
education
and medical facility
are provided
by the
government
for free to its
citizens
, then a
country
will
get
more benefits from it.
Education
and healthy life are two basic needs of every
citizen
and a
government
is in fact, formed to
make
sure no
citizen
is deprived
of his basic needs.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes