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Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it leads to environmental damage and should be stopped. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it leads to environmental damage and should be stopped. v. 3
The increase in the amount of goods and services produced per head of population over a period of time is measured in terms of economic growth. It is true that economic growth plays a vital role in eliminating the poverty of any country. Thus, I strongly agreed that the benefits of economic growth are far greater than its damages on the part of the environment. (65) We had seen in the past that people had limited resources and thus lead a very simple life. They had fewer occupations and lack of education. In short, the process of economic growth was really slow in the past. (39) Presently, it is doubtless that uplifting economy and reducing poverty is a major goal of every country. Nowadays, economic growth is not only boosting the socioeconomic standards of any nation, but it is also contributing a lot in reducing the poverty of the world. For example, if the production of goods and services in any country matches the needs of its residents, then its economy is automatically jumped high. Similarly, the economic growth is produced more opportunities for people and prevent them from falling into poverty. (86) The recent development in the world economy, although, has generated some environmental issues like cutting of forests, clearing land for housing, however, it has played a major role in uplifting the social and economical standards of people all over the world. Thus, if the countries keep on growing economies in a positive way, then the world will soon get rid of poverty in the near future. (66) Hence, despite its few environmental concerns, economic growth is the best solution to end world poverty. (16)
The increase in the amount of
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goods
and services produced per head of population over a period of time
is measured
in terms of
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economic
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growth
. It is true that
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economic
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growth
plays a vital role in eliminating the
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poverty
of any
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country
.
Thus
, I
strongly
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agreed
that the benefits of
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economic
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growth
are far greater than its damages on the part of the environment. (65)

We had
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seen
in the past that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
had limited resources and
thus
lead a
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very
simple life. They had fewer occupations and lack of education. In short, the process of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
was
really
slow in the past. (39)

Presently
, it is doubtless that uplifting
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economy
and reducing
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poverty
is a major goal of every
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country
. Nowadays,
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economic
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growth
is not
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only
boosting the socioeconomic standards of any nation,
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but
it is
also
contributing a lot in reducing the
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poverty
of the
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world
.
For example
, if the production of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
and services in any
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country
matches the needs of its residents, then its
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economy
is
automatically
jumped high.
Similarly
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
is produced
more opportunities for
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people
and
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prevent
them from falling into
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poverty
. (86)

The recent development in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
, although, has generated
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some
environmental issues like cutting of forests, clearing land for housing,
however
, it has played a major role in uplifting the social and economical standards of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
all over the
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world
.
Thus
, if the
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countries
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
on growing
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economies
in a
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positive
way, then the
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world
will
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soon
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get
rid of
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poverty
in the near future. (66)

Hence
, despite its few environmental concerns,
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economic
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growth
is the best solution to
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end
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poverty
. (16)
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it leads to environmental damage and should be stopped. v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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