There is a well known saying that “excess of everything is Bad”. Sugar is also known as sweet poison in many countries because of harms associated with its excessive usage. Due to increasing damage of sugar, there are people who demand from government to ban or at least restrict the use of sugar while other still believe that it is responsibility of individuals to manage their intake. I shall discuss both the views before concluding.
Easiest way of stopping people from something is to impose ban on consumption or make its availability difficult. There is a group of people who have this point of view that government should intervene and take necessary steps to control people’s sugar usage. This can be achieved in many ways including educating people about the harms caused by excessive sugar consumption or by raising the prices or imposing taxes on purchase. If education serves the purpose, it is good for all else taxes will eventually impact on the purchase power and hance usage will be dropped.
On the contrary, there is a bunch of people who believes on self help. They emphasizes on self control instead of being guided by government authorities. Everyone is responsible for their doings and people are aware of the hazards caused by intense use of sugar, so their health is in their own hand. They have to work on limiting themselves on intake of sweet.
To summarize, I support the idea of second group as everything cannot be put on governments as individuals hold same level of responsibilities. Health is wealth and if we will not take good care of ourselves, no one will. Being mature people, it is our sheer responsibility to maintain our diet and make sure to not have anything which can risk our health and life in a longer run.
There is a well known saying that “excess of everything is
Bad
”.
Sugar
is
also
known as sweet poison in
many
countries
because
of harms associated with its excessive usage. Due to increasing
damage of
sugar
, there are
people
who demand from
government
to ban or at least restrict the
use
of
sugar
while other
still
believe that it is responsibility of individuals to manage their intake. I shall discuss both the views
before
concluding.
Easiest
way of stopping
people
from something is to impose ban on consumption or
make
its availability difficult. There is a group of
people
who have this point of view that
government
should intervene and take necessary steps to control
people’s
sugar
usage. This can
be achieved
in
many
ways including educating
people
about the harms caused by excessive
sugar
consumption or by raising the prices or imposing taxes on
purchase
. If education serves the purpose, it is
good
for all else taxes will
eventually
impact on the
purchase
power and
hance
usage will
be dropped
.
On the contrary
, there is a bunch of
people
who believes on self
help
. They
emphasizes
on
self control
instead
of
being guided
by
government
authorities. Everyone is responsible for their doings and
people
are aware of the hazards caused by intense
use
of
sugar
,
so
their health is in their
own
hand. They
have to
work on limiting themselves on intake of sweet.
To summarize
, I support the
idea
of second group as everything cannot
be put
on
governments
as individuals hold same level of responsibilities. Health is wealth and if we will not take
good
care of ourselves, no one will. Being mature
people
, it is our sheer responsibility to maintain our diet and
make
sure to not have anything which can
risk
our health and life in a longer run.
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18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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