Some people believe that the internet could be dangerous to our secrecy and has many downsides over the benefits. In this essay, I would describe this opinion and give my own viewpoint.
To begin with, this might be true that our privacy could be disturbed because of the internet. Everyone could access the internet as easy as pie, moreover by hackers. As we know, there are many people who take photos from social media and edit them to become porn pictures then put them on the internet purposely. Usually, this happens to famous people such as actors or public officials. Additionally, our enemy is not only the hackers but the creator of the social media itself. This shown by Edward Snowden, the man who was an employee of the CIA revealed that all of our information and activities are being watched by CIA or America’s government by the camera on the laptop or gadget. Perhaps, the social media companies let them access our details.
However, we have to admit that the internet could change our lives in many good things, even these could overweight the drawbacks. Firstly, although people do not have a place physically for selling, they could put their creations, used things, or goods in social media such as Facebook, because the citizens like to find any needs on the internet then order them directly more than go to the store. Secondly, the internet also affects people who are in traveling or staying in the oversea. It could help them if they hurt and they are looking for the hospital.
All in all, I completely disagree that people gain more disadvantages because it could ease our activities such as finding information about the traffics, doctors and so on. Even though it could be unsafe for the security of our privacy, but it depends on the person to take care themselves.
Some
people
believe that the internet could be
dangerous
to our secrecy and has
many
downsides over the benefits. In this essay, I would
describe
this opinion and give my
own
viewpoint.
To
begin
with, this might be true that our privacy could
be disturbed
because
of the internet. Everyone could access the internet as easy as pie,
moreover
by hackers. As we know, there are
many
people
who take photos from
social
media
and edit them to become porn pictures then put them on the internet
purposely
.
Usually
, this happens to
famous
people
such as actors or public officials.
Additionally
, our enemy is not
only
the hackers
but
the creator of the
social
media
itself. This shown by Edward Snowden, the
man
who was an employee of the CIA revealed that all of our information and activities are being
watched
by CIA or America’s
government
by the camera on the laptop or gadget. Perhaps, the
social
media
companies
let
them access our
details
.
However
, we
have to
admit that the internet could
change
our
lives
in
many
good
things, even these could overweight the drawbacks.
Firstly
, although
people
do not have a place
physically
for selling, they could put their creations,
used
things, or
goods
in
social
media
such as Facebook,
because
the citizens like to find any needs on the internet then order them
directly
more than go to the store.
Secondly
, the internet
also
affects
people
who are in traveling or staying in the oversea. It could
help
them if they
hurt and
they are looking for the hospital.
All in all, I completely disagree that
people
gain more disadvantages
because
it could
ease
our activities such as finding information about the traffics, doctors and
so
on.
Even though
it could be unsafe for the security of our privacy,
but
it depends on the person to take care themselves.