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During last twenty years, the asssessment of students has undergone a major transformation. Many educational institutions have shifted their focus from traditional examination towards a variety of innovative assessment techniques, as they believe examinat v.2

During last twenty years, the asssessment of students has undergone a major transformation. Many educational institutions have shifted their focus from traditional examination towards a variety of innovative assessment techniques, as they believe examinat v. 2
Over many decades, psychological examination for student level is changing. Both schools and universities dealt in using the upgrade testing tools than the old way process. It supposes to acquire validation of students’ ability result. In this case I highlight my vast agreement, because people’s ability might upgrade by time. First of all, we have to understand that many ways to assess student’s capacity. In order to fulfill the purpose of the test whether that is intelligence test, interest and aptitude test, personality test, and more. In addition, every purpose has provide the suitable tools. However, by the change time, there are plenty of factors which transform people’s behaviour and condition so sometimes we could not assess their personality with the same technique. For instance, student in 13 nowadays is able to think the way person in 20. In this case, we should adjust the examination technique or probably update it. Undoubtedly, the obsolete calculation tests have a restricted interpretation. It is normal somehow because it also depends to the environment, habituation, and willingness in the past. Moreover, people in that era might have the small range of variety. On the contrary, human today has a unique personality and notion. And I see that every approach has to be applicable to this issue if we require the valid and reliable human’s mental description. For example, we should define the type of ADHD syndrome in more detail throughout three examination tools instead of one decision. Because many traditionals just standardise a human tendency. To recapitulate, vast institution get transform the test approach because they comprehend that the more it upgraded, the more they will find the original result. Furthermore, they also understand about the importance.
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decades, psychological examination for
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student
level is changing. Both schools and universities dealt in using the upgrade testing tools than the
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old
way process. It supposes to acquire validation of
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students’
ability result.
In this case
I highlight my vast agreement,
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because
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people
’s ability might upgrade by time.

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, we
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have to
understand that
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many
ways to assess
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student’s
capacity. In order to fulfill the purpose of the
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test
whether
that is
intelligence
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test
, interest and aptitude
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test
, personality
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test
, and more.
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, every purpose has
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provide
the suitable tools.
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, by the
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change
time, there are
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plenty
of factors which transform
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people
’s
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behaviour
and condition
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so
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sometimes
we could not assess their personality with the same technique.
For instance
,
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student
in 13 nowadays is able to
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think
the way person in 20.
In this case
, we should adjust the examination technique or
probably
update it.

Undoubtedly
, the obsolete calculation
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tests
have a restricted interpretation. It is normal somehow
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because
it
also
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depends
to the environment, habituation, and willingness in the past.
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,
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people
in that era might have the
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small
range of variety.
On the contrary
, human
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today
has a unique personality and notion. And I
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see
that every approach
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has to
be applicable to this issue if we require the valid and reliable human’s mental description.
For example
, we should define the type of ADHD syndrome in more detail throughout three examination tools
instead
of one decision.
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Because
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many
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traditionals
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just
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standardise
a human tendency.

To recapitulate, vast institution
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get
transform the
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test
approach
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because
they comprehend that the more it upgraded, the more they will find the original result.
Furthermore
, they
also
understand about the importance.
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10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay During last twenty years, the asssessment of students has undergone a major transformation. Many educational institutions have shifted their focus from traditional examination towards a variety of innovative assessment techniques, as they believe examinat v. 2

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4 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
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