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Driving a car is the best mode of transport To what extent do agree or disagree with statement? Give reason and examples from your own experience. Write about 250 words. v.1

Driving a car is the best mode of transport Give reason and examples from your own experience. Write about 250 words. v. 1
Some peoples think that going on a road by car is the greatest thing to do. In my mind using a car for transportation is not a good thing. Firstly, Car can cost a lot of money. You have to pay a lot of money to buy a car that it can be very expensive. Also, you have to take care of it which meant you have to spend more money on checking services, or repairing services. To drive a car you have to pay for fuels, and also pay tax. This meant using a car as your transportation is costing more money that the other choice of transport. This is shown, if you chose like a public bus to transport, you will pay less money that taking your own car. Secondly, Driving a car can provide air pollution. The car's engine produces smoke which can make the air dirty and cause climate change. For examples, the smoke from the engine contained some bad gas, like carbon dioxide, which is a kind of gas that pollute the air, and also makes the earth hotter, for peoples it make peoples can not breath well because there are no fresh air, and if affects people's health, like lung problems, and even cause cancer. To sum up, Driving a car can cause air pollution, spend much money and also affects people's health. This meant driving a car for transportation if not a good thing. For recommendations, you should use the public transport or cycling to reduce payments and air pollutions.
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peoples
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think
that going on a road by
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car
is the greatest thing to do. In my mind using a
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car
for transportation is not a
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good
thing.

Firstly
,
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can cost
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a lot of
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money
. You
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have to
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pay
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a lot of
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money
to
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buy
a
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car
that it can be
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very
expensive.
Also
, you
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have to
take care of it which meant you
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have to
spend more
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money
on checking services, or repairing services. To drive a
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car
you
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have to
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pay
for fuels, and
also
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pay
tax. This meant using a
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car
as your transportation is costing more
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money
that the other choice of transport. This
is shown
, if you chose like a public bus to transport, you will
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pay
less
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money
that taking your
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own
car.

Secondly
, Driving a
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car
can provide
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air
pollution. The car's engine produces smoke which can
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make
the
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air
dirty and cause climate
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change
. For examples, the smoke from the engine contained
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some
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bad
gas, like carbon dioxide, which is a kind of gas that pollute the
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air
, and
also
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makes
the earth hotter, for peoples it
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make
peoples
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can not breath
well
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because
there are no fresh
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air
, and if affects
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people
's health, like lung problems, and even cause cancer.

To sum up, Driving a
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car
can cause
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air
pollution, spend much
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money
and
also
affects
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people
's health. This meant driving a
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car
for transportation if not a
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good
thing. For recommendations, you should
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use
the public transport or cycling to
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reduce
payments and
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air
pollutions.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Driving a car is the best mode of transport Give reason and examples from your own experience. Write about 250 words. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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