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If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons. OR If a five year old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?

Do you think that parents should be punished if their five-year-old child commits a crime? From what age should children be held responsible for their own behaviours? v. 1
Child learns from their parents. They provide initial learning environment to children. These days, there is an ongoing debate that whether parents are responsible for the wrong doing of their child and who should be punished for these crimes. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for this kind of behavior. Bad behavior has its own reasons. Children who perform any act which is not good for the society should be given warnings by the parents. Parents need to keep an eye on their kids. They should be given appropriate love and kindness, however, etiquettes should also be taught frequently. For the wrong doing by children, parents should give them small punishments like not providing them their favorite food or disallowing to play with their best friends. By these small punishments, it is highly likely that children will refrain from doing wrong acts again. Similarly, parents who scolded their children are not good for their social, mental and physiological health. Though, it is responsibility of the parents for any crime done by five years old kid. For instance, the education provided by Muhammad; prophet of God, children should be taught till the age of seven. According to him, parents should not punish for prayer till the age of seven. Parent only punish after the age of ten years. Hence, we can infer from above that parents need to educate their children steadily till the age of puberty. Nevertheless, the whole responsibility is on parents. In a nutshell, parents are responsible for the acts by children although they need to educate their kids slowly with very small punishment. The essay discussed the roles of parents in their children's life and way of punishment on their wrong doings.
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parents
. They provide initial learning environment to
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children
. These days, there is an ongoing debate that whether
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parents
are responsible for the
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wrong
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doing
of their child and who should
be punished
for these crimes. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for this kind of behavior.

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behavior has its
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own
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who perform any act which is not
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good
for the society should be
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given
warnings by the
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parents
.
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Parents
need to
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keep
an eye on their kids. They should be
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appropriate
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love
and kindness,
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etiquettes
should
also
be taught
frequently
. For the
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wrong
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doing
by
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children
,
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parents
should give them
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small
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punishments
like not providing them their favorite food or disallowing to play with their best friends. By these
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small
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punishments
, it is
highly
likely that
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children
will refrain from
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doing
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wrong
acts again.

Similarly
,
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parents
who scolded their
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children
are not
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good
for their social, mental and physiological health. Though, it is responsibility of the
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parents
for any crime done by five years
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old
kid.
For instance
, the education provided by Muhammad; prophet of God,
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children
should
be taught
till the
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age
of seven. According to him,
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parents
should not punish for prayer till the
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age
of seven.
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Parent
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only
punish after the
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age
of ten years.
Hence
, we can infer from above that
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parents
need to educate their
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children
steadily
till the
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age
of puberty.
Nevertheless
, the whole responsibility is on parents.

In a nutshell,
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parents
are responsible for the acts by
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children
although they need to educate their kids
slowly
with
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very
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small
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punishment
. The essay discussed the roles of
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parents
in their children's life and way of
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punishment
on their
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wrong
doings.
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IELTS essay If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons. OR If a five year old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?

Essay
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4 paragraphs
288 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Check your writing for errors
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