Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons. OR If a five year old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?

Do you think that parents should be punished if their five-year-old child commits a crime? From what age should children be held responsible for their own behaviours? v. 1

Child learns from their parents. They provide initial learning environment to children. These days, there is an ongoing debate that whether parents are responsible for the wrong doing of their child and who should be punished for these crimes. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for this kind of behavior. Bad behavior has its own reasons. Children who perform any act which is not good for the society should be given warnings by the parents. Parents need to keep an eye on their kids. They should be given appropriate love and kindness, however, etiquettes should also be taught frequently. For the wrong doing by children, parents should give them small punishments like not providing them their favorite food or disallowing to play with their best friends. By these small punishments, it is highly likely that children will refrain from doing wrong acts again. Similarly, parents who scolded their children are not good for their social, mental and physiological health. Though, it is responsibility of the parents for any crime done by five years old kid. For instance, the education provided by Muhammad; prophet of God, children should be taught till the age of seven. According to him, parents should not punish for prayer till the age of seven. Parent only punish after the age of ten years. Hence, we can infer from above that parents need to educate their children steadily till the age of puberty. Nevertheless, the whole responsibility is on parents. In a nutshell, parents are responsible for the acts by children although they need to educate their kids slowly with very small punishment. The essay discussed the roles of parents in their children's life and way of punishment on their wrong doings.

Child learns from their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
. They provide initial learning environment to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
. These days, there is an ongoing debate that whether You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 are responsible for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuntrueinaccuratemistakenunsoundbaderroneous
wrong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 of their child and who should be punished
 for these crimes. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for this kind of behavior.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
Bad
 behavior has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 reasons. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
Children
 who perform any act which is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for the society should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 warnings by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
Parents
 need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 an eye on their kids. They should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 appropriate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 and kindness, however
, Possible spelling mistake found.etiquettenetiquettes
etiquettes
 should also
be taught
frequently
. For the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuntrueinaccuratemistakenunsoundbaderroneous
wrong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 should give them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishments
 like not providing them their favorite food or disallowing to play with their best friends. By these This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishments
, it is highly
 likely that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 will refrain from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuntrueinaccuratemistakenunsoundbaderroneous
wrong
 acts again.

Similarly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 who scolded their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for their social, mental and physiological health. Though, it is responsibility of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 for any crime done by five years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 kid. For instance
, the education provided by Muhammad; prophet of God, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 should be taught
 till the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of seven. According to him, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 should not punish for prayer till the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of seven. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
Parent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 punish after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of ten years. Hence
, we can infer from above that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 need to educate their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
steadily
 till the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of puberty. Nevertheless
, the whole responsibility is on parents.

In a nutshell, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 are responsible for the acts by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 although they need to educate their kids slowly
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishment
. The essay discussed the roles of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 in their children's life and way of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishment
 on their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuntrueinaccuratemistakenunsoundbaderroneous
wrong
 doings. 