With the great improvement of the social productivity, all graduate students in every year need to be more competitive in order to find good jobs. So many people claims that the success is the most vital thing they need to pursuit. However, there are still a lot of people believe that having a happy and optimistic attitude is more important even when people fail. As I concerned, I totally agree that the positive and optimistic attitude is much more important.
Remaining in happy and optimistic even in a hard time will not only make us happy but helps us to keep trying to see more possibilities beyond the failure and success. If people only work on the purpose of success, they would limit their eyes definitely, since the success is the only dimension and standard they could find. However if people could have a open mindset with positive attitude, there would be more standards to rely on and people could reflect themselves in other perspectives. For example, my friend he did not good in his last university application, since he was too focoused on the success in admission instead other valuable aspects. He was too stressed out and didn' t relax and stay happy enough. Then he finally got results with unsatisfiction. In this way remaining happy and optimistic is really necessary.
Also, the a happy and optimistic mindset would be very helpful to our mental health. When people are urged to be successful, they would stressed out mostly. However, if we do not stay health both physically and intellectually, the success is nothing.
With the great improvement of the social productivity, all graduate students in every year need to be more competitive in order to find
good
jobs.
So
many
people
claims
that the
success
is the most vital thing they need to pursuit.
However
, there are
still
a lot of
people
believe that having a
happy
and optimistic attitude is more
important
even when
people
fail. As I concerned, I
totally
agree
that the
positive
and optimistic attitude is much more
important
.
Remaining in
happy
and optimistic even in a
hard
time will not
only
make
us
happy
but
helps
us to
keep
trying to
see
more possibilities beyond the failure and
success
. If
people
only
work on the purpose of
success
, they would limit their eyes definitely, since the
success
is the
only
dimension and standard they could find.
However
if
people
could have
a
open mindset with
positive
attitude, there would be more standards to rely on and
people
could reflect themselves in other perspectives.
For example
, my friend he did not
good
in his last university application, since he was too
focoused
on the
success
in admission
instead
other valuable aspects. He was too
stressed
out and
didn&
#039; t relax and stay
happy
enough
. Then he
finally
got
results with
unsatisfiction
. In this way remaining
happy
and optimistic is
really
necessary.
Also
,
the a
happy
and optimistic mindset would be
very
helpful to our mental health. When
people
are urged
to be successful, they would
stressed
out
mostly
.
However
, if we do not stay health both
physically
and
intellectually
, the
success
is nothing.
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