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Do you prefer long-term trips or short-term trips? Use details and examples to support your explanation. v.1

Do you prefer long-term trips or short-term trips? Use details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1
Economic relocation is quite common among medical expertise over the last few years. Doctors and nurses often leave their homeland in order to find more lucrative jobs abroad. This essay will discuss what those problems are as well as suitable measures that can be taken to tackle the problem of moving of medical professionals. There are various problems that are associated with the moving of medical professionals to other countries. Firstly, the homeland will left without the medical expertise it once had. For instance, In Cameron there are shortages of Doctors, as they had left their home country in order to get better job opportunity abroad. Secondly, there would be no one in the home country who can train the medical students who wants to make a career in the medical field. In short, lack of medical knowledge in the country would be disastrous for the whole nation. While the problems may seem intractable, there are solutions available. The first solution is to limit the number of medical practitioners from certain countries. This would force them to stay in their home countries. Another option would create an association between countries having a high rate of migration. If, For example, one doctor or nurse migrated from Camron to Australia then one doctor would have to work in the country Cameron for a few years in order to fill the gap. A proposed limitation of migration and swapping arrangement might just solve the problems that are caused. This essay discussed the problems that are associated with migration of medical professionals seeking higher paying jobs in wealthier nations. While the problems are immense, but if proper steps taken, they can be solved easily.
Economic relocation is quite common among
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medical
expertise over the last few years.
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Doctors
and nurses
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often
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leave
their homeland in order to find more lucrative jobs abroad. This essay will discuss what those
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problems
are
as well
as suitable measures that can
be taken
to tackle the
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problem
of moving of
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medical
professionals.

There are various
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problems
that
are associated
with the moving of
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medical
professionals to other
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countries
.
Firstly
, the homeland will
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left
without the
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medical
expertise it once had.
For instance
, In Cameron there are shortages of
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Doctors
, as they had
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left
their home
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country
in order to
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get
better job opportunity abroad.
Secondly
, there would be no one in the home
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country
who can train the
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medical
students who
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wants
to
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make
a career in the
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medical
field. In short, lack of
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medical
knowledge in the
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country
would be disastrous for the whole nation.

While the
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problems
may seem intractable, there are solutions available. The
first
solution is to limit the number of
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medical
practitioners from certain
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countries
. This would force them to stay in their home
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countries
. Another option would create an association between
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countries
having a high rate of migration. If,
For example
, one
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doctor
or nurse migrated from
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Camron
to Australia then one
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doctor
would
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have to
work in the
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country
Cameron for a few years in order to fill the gap. A proposed limitation of migration and swapping arrangement might
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just
solve the
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problems
that
are caused
.

This essay discussed the
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problems
that
are associated
with migration of
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medical
professionals seeking higher paying jobs in wealthier nations. While the
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problems
are immense,
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but
if proper steps taken, they can
be solved
easily
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Do you prefer long-term trips or short-term trips? Use details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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