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Do you like to spend time by yourself What do you usually do when you spend time with yourself What did you do last time when you were alone v.1

Do you like to spend time by yourself What do you usually do when you spend time with yourself What did you do last time when you were alone v. 1
Indeed, people should more focus on the purpose of the building rather than attractive and engineers should not tens about constructing the building as a task of art. In my viewpoint, this notion holds a valid ground. My perception discussed in the ensuing paragraphs. Firstly, the function of the place is maximum utilise for task is the most powerful argument for the above viewpoint. To be more precise, the purpose of the building is maximum place is used rather than west in giving an attraction and an elevation. People construct building for office, house and other purposes, so they should try to cover the maximum area are usable and construct as a requirement of field. Partition, furniture, interior these all things are important, but the main maximum slot for work. Furthermore, the second argument is the safety of buildings and pubic. Some time may happen, architects and people, more focus on the building's structure. This type of mistake becomes a danger for people in the future. Thus, it is more important to focus on the uses of building and structure rather than beautiful. However, the job of architects is to construct a building with all things such as safety, maximum space utilisation for work, give an elevation to building as well as build attractive. In this modern era, they should try to cover all things because that is their job as an artist as well as an engineer. In conclusion, in building most vital is the purpose and uses of the building so try to more utilise place as well as focus on safety. Moreover, architects do their job as an artist and also an engineer.
Indeed
,
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people
should more
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focus
on the
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purpose
of the
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building
rather
than attractive and engineers should not tens about constructing the
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building
as a task of art. In my viewpoint, this notion holds a valid ground. My perception discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.

Firstly
, the function of the place is maximum
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utilise
for task is the most powerful argument for the above viewpoint. To be more precise, the
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purpose
of the
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building
is maximum place is
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used
rather
than west in giving an attraction and an elevation.
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People
construct
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building
for office,
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house
and other
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purposes
,
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so
they should try to cover the maximum area are usable and construct as a requirement of field. Partition, furniture, interior these all things are
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important
,
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but
the main maximum slot for work.

Furthermore
, the second argument is the safety of
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buildings
and
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pubic
.
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Some
time may happen, architects and
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people
, more
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focus
on the building's structure. This type of mistake becomes a
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danger
for
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people
in the future.
Thus
, it is more
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important
to
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focus
on the
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uses
of
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building
and structure
rather
than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
.

However
, the job of architects is to construct a
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building
with all things such as safety, maximum space
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utilisation
for work, give an elevation to
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building
as well
as build attractive. In this modern era, they should try to cover all things
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because
that is
their job as an artist
as well
as an engineer.

In conclusion
, in
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building
most vital is the
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purpose
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
of the
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building
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
try to more
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utilise
place
as well
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
focus
on safety.
Moreover
, architects do their job as an artist and
also
an engineer.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
Flora Lewis

IELTS essay Do you like to spend time by yourself What do you usually do when you spend time with yourself What did you do last time when you were alone v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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