In this progressive and sophisticated world, the producing marchanties and staples is a critical factors that has a special role in modern humans life. Among this, advertising is one of the best way to introduce these products to mankinds. When it comes to this point, people have some debates as to whether arvertises make produces better than they really or not. Personally, I agree with the first group and in what follows, two reasons will be discused to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is that advertising is the important way for companies to sale their products; therefore, it is the important task of advertises to incorage peoples to buy. In addition this issue is not just in this period of time and it comes from the ancient time when people had not any currency and they bought and sold just with staples. For example, If i have a production i will persuade people to buy my product. Therefore its the natural that advertises overstates about products. Producers pay a lot of money for these advertises and they should achieve their goals.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my statce is that advertises just speak about perfect charachteristics of products and they dont demonestrate disadvantages and defects of products. The producers who order advertises, know that if they show the defects of productions the custumers will not buy their products so they should tell some big lies to costumers. For instance, my employee has a fish and shrimp export company and when he order advertises just show some perfect advantages; otherwise i know about alot of disadvantages like antibiotcs residuals and some sulfur problems and about histamin that can lead to sudden death in some peoples.
To sum up, based on all arguementations stated above, it is natural that advertises overstate about products because if they tell the truth people ingnor them and because they produce in order to help producers to sell their products.
In this progressive and sophisticated world, the producing
marchanties
and staples is a critical
factors
that has a special role in modern
humans
life. Among this, advertising is one of the best way to introduce these
products
to
mankinds
. When it
comes
to this point,
people
have
some
debates
as to whether
arvertises
make
produces better than they
really
or not.
Personally
, I
agree
with the
first
group and in what follows, two reasons will be
discused
to shed light on this
idea
.
The
first
reason coming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is that advertising is the
important
way for
companies
to sale their
products
;
therefore
, it is the
important
task of
advertises
to
incorage
peoples
to
buy
. In
addition
this issue is not
just
in this period of time and it
comes
from the ancient time when
people
had not any
currency and
they
bought
and sold
just
with staples.
For example
, If
i
have a production
i
will persuade
people
to
buy
my
product
.
Therefore
its
the natural that
advertises
overstates about
products
. Producers pay
a lot of
money for these
advertises
and they should achieve their goals.
Another
equally
noteworthy point corroborating my
statce
is that
advertises
just
speak about perfect
charachteristics
of
products and
they
dont
demonestrate
disadvantages and defects of
products
. The producers who order
advertises
, know that if they
show
the defects of productions the
custumers
will not
buy
their
products
so
they should
tell
some
big
lies to costumers.
For instance
, my employee has a fish and shrimp export
company
and when he
order
advertises
just
show
some
perfect advantages;
otherwise
i
know about
alot
of disadvantages like
antibiotcs
residuals and
some
sulfur problems and about
histamin
that can lead to sudden death in
some
peoples.
To sum up, based on all
arguementations
stated above, it is natural that
advertises
overstate about
products
because
if they
tell
the truth
people
ingnor
them and
because
they produce in order to
help
producers to sell their
products
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29Mistakes