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TPO 10: task2: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use details and examples to explain your answer. All children should be required to learn a second language in school. v.1

TPO 10: task2: . All children should be required to learn a second language in school. v. 1
Media lets people to receive and transmit information making everyone knows about events on the planet. And with technological advancements, it has become even much easier. Unfortunately, the news making process is still very influenced by journalists which sometimes resulted in biased and not reliable data we get. Thus, some stop believes news at all. In my eyes, there are only few independent journalists who can be trusted and called honest people, while an enormous world wide known news agencies have forgotten what it means to be a true reporter and serve the common people. First and foremost reason why I consider independent journalism is the only source people have to believe is their intention. Although in the most cases, they are well known in the world of news and could earn more money, making fake news, these people still believe in freedom of speech and professional ethics, creating such an honest and provocative content which can even be banned by the authorities. To cite this in two thousand nineteen there was a breakthrough and a shocking journalistic review, which reveal bribery of Moscow mayor and his administration. While it was the most discussed topic on the Internet media, the main governmental channels kept silent as it was the authorities had been involved. The only one brave journalist was courageous enough to declare the truth because journalism and the freedom of speech is his way of living. Finally, why not all the news sources are reliable is that we are all just humans and it makes our brain to add some details while giving information to others. Moreover, due to cultural differences they can receive information in a differ way, according to our cultural patterns which we knew and perceived in childhood. For instance, when Ireland government revealed many cases of sexual abuse of foster children by Catholic church members, a lot of the Protestants considered them as false accusations, because they were brought up differently, believing that men served the God could not be such monsters. To sum up, I reckon that with globalisation people today faced with the problem of information approving, which means that one should try to check facts and try to look at the news through different angles before believing ones because it was shown on a federal news channel.
Media
lets
people
to receive and transmit
information
making everyone knows about
events
on the planet. And with technological advancements, it has become even much easier. Unfortunately, the
news
making process is
still
very
influenced by journalists which
sometimes
resulted in biased and not reliable data we
get
.
Thus
,
some
stop
believes
news
at all. In my eyes, there are
only
few independent journalists who can
be trusted
and called honest
people
, while an enormous
world wide
known
news
agencies have forgotten what it means to be a true reporter and serve the common
people
.

First
and foremost reason why I consider independent journalism is the
only
source
people
have to
believe is their intention. Although in the most cases, they are well known in the world of
news
and could earn more money, making fake
news
, these
people
still
believe in freedom of speech and professional ethics, creating such an honest and provocative content which can even
be banned
by the authorities. To cite this in two thousand nineteen there was a breakthrough and a shocking journalistic review, which reveal bribery of Moscow mayor and his administration. While it was the most discussed topic on the Internet media, the main governmental channels
kept
silent as it was the authorities had
been involved
. The
only
one brave journalist was courageous
enough
to declare the truth
because
journalism and the freedom of speech is his way of living.

Finally
, why not all the
news
sources are reliable is that we are all
just
humans and it
makes
our brain to
add
some
details
while giving
information
to others.
Moreover
, due to cultural differences they can receive
information
in
a differ
way, according to our cultural patterns which we knew and perceived in childhood.
For instance
, when Ireland
government
revealed
many
cases of sexual abuse of foster children by
Catholic church
members,
a lot of
the Protestants considered them as false accusations,
because
they
were brought
up
differently
, believing that
men
served the God could not be such monsters.

To sum up, I reckon that with
globalisation
people
today
faced with the problem of
information
approving, which means that one should try to
check
facts and try to look at the
news
through
different
angles
before
believing ones
because
it
was shown
on a federal
news
channel.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 10: task2: . All children should be required to learn a second language in school. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
385 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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