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Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v.31

Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v. 31
In today' s world, democracy is something that has changed the primitive thoughts of many people. Some years ago, there were people that thought that the only correct point of view were their concepts, even some countries obligated their citizens to accept the government ideas by the force. Nevertheless, after many strikes around the world and the recognizing of free speech, this fact has transformed the society. Thus, I don' t agree with the statement that the professor should not provide their preference about political or social affairs. I based my point of view in some arguments that I will develop in the next paragraphs. First, if the professor states his point of view, he might give a lesson to students. The school is a place that contains students from a mixture of social levels. Therefore, we might find different subjects educated in different ways and also with different ideas about social and political topics. For instance, if the professor makes an argument about a social problem, he for sure will create a discussion in the class. This debate will be beneficial because some students might have wrong ideas about topics and they don' t realize it, in other words the student might believe that certain political party is bad because her or his father thinks that, but when listening to the professor he or she understands that his or her father was wrong. As we can see, the professor' s view might help students to clarify their thoughts. In addition, if the professor expresses his point, and some students don' t agree, anyway they will learn to accept and respect the ideas of others. For instance, I remember when I was in high school. My friend Pedro who was a fanatic catholic person, was very disappointed when he hear our math professor saying that ' ' he doesn' t believe in any religion' ' . This was something really shocking for him, but latter on, he learned that the professor was a great person and that he has to respect the idea of each person. This experience taught me that listening to other people’ view, we might learn to cope with them. Notwithstanding, I acknowledge that sometimes people state their point of view and some individuals don' t accept it and this might create even worse problems that can might be fatal, for example in situations where a religious group don' t accept other groups belief. But overall, I consider that people should claim their ideas. To sum up, for the reasons stated above, I believe the professors should state their point of view because it might give a lesson to students and also it might teach them to respect other people' ideas
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, he
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give a lesson to
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. The school is a place that contains
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from a mixture of
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social
levels.
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might
find
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subjects educated in
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ways and
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problem, he for sure will create a discussion in the
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class
. This debate will be beneficial
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believe that certain political party is
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help
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students
to clarify their thoughts.

In addition
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expresses his
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and respect the
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of others.
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, I remember when I was in high school. My friend Pedro who was a fanatic catholic person, was
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very
disappointed when he
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saying that ' ' he
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shocking for him,
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latter on, he learned that the
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professor
was a great person and that he
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has to
respect the
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idea
of each person. This experience taught me that listening to
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other
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people’
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view
, we
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learn to cope with them.

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overall
, I consider that
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should claim their
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ideas
.

To sum up, for the reasons stated above, I believe the
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professors
should state their
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point
of
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view
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because
it
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give a lesson to
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teach them to respect
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68Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v. 31

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
453 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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