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that governments should spend more money to improve internet access not on public transportation? v. 1

It is true that there are mixed opinions which are relevant to a media topic nowadays. While some people insist that news which whether appeared in magazines or broadcasted on TV have resulted in nothing, I opine that this thing brings to us both advantages and disadvantages. My twofold essay will demonstrate this perspective in details. On the one hand, there is a plethora of news that is spread out day-to-day have no useful information for certain people. Firstly, people have been overwhelming recently by advertisement which have been rising on an unprecedented scale. In other words, every day it seems as if people are bombarded with banners, flyers, pop-ups which are attached in newspapers or TV program. Secondly, the advent of the internet which entails people have access more and more online information which might be not appropriate with some of them, especially irritates them. Kenh14, for example, which is a big media agency in Viet Nam usually carries too many private stories of Vietnamese celebrities and trivia, that are meaningless. On the other hand, I would put forth the strong arguments in favour of my views that the news channels have influenced society in many positive ways. Obviously, press and TV are essential channels, helping people to keep abreast of several breaking news. It has played a vital important role in the fight against pandemic in the throughout world caused by Covid-19 virus; thank to the media, the medical information is transmitted promptly which might prevent the epidemic outbreak. Moreover, it is a great way that people can earn more knowledge through the television programs. For instance, Learning English will become more exciting and practical when people have a habit of reading some English magazines and watching English News. In conclusion, Although there is a great deal of drawbacks of media channels, I believe that the marvellous impact on society of the upside is overweigh its disadvantages.

IELTS essay Do you agree or disagree with the statement that governments should spend more money to improve internet access not on public transportation? v.1

It is true that there
are mixed
opinions which are relevant to a
media
topic nowadays. While
some
people
insist that
news
which whether appeared in magazines or broadcasted on TV have resulted in nothing, I opine that this thing brings to us both advantages and disadvantages. My twofold essay will demonstrate this perspective in
details
.

On the one hand, there is a plethora of
news
that
is spread
out day-to-day have no useful information for certain
people
.
Firstly
,
people
have been overwhelming recently by advertisement which have been rising on an unprecedented scale.
In other words
, every day it seems as if
people
are bombarded
with banners, flyers, pop-ups which
are attached
in newspapers or TV program.
Secondly
, the advent of the internet which entails
people
have access more and more online information which might be not appropriate with
some
of them,
especially
irritates them. Kenh14,
for example
, which is a
big
media
agency in
Viet
Nam
usually
carries too
many
private stories of Vietnamese celebrities and trivia, that are meaningless.

On the other hand
, I would put forth the strong arguments in
favour
of my views that the
news
channels have influenced society in
many
positive
ways.
Obviously
, press and TV are essential channels, helping
people
to
keep
abreast of several breaking
news
. It has played a vital
important
role in the fight against pandemic in the throughout world caused by Covid-19 virus; thank to the
media
, the medical information
is transmitted
promptly
which might
prevent
the epidemic outbreak.
Moreover
, it is a great way that
people
can earn more knowledge through the television programs.
For instance
, Learning English will become more exciting and practical when
people
have a habit of reading
some
English magazines and watching English News.

In conclusion
, Although there is a great deal of drawbacks of
media
channels, I believe that the
marvellous
impact on society of the upside is
overweigh
its disadvantages.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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319 words
7.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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