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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to remember and learn from the past Use details and examples to explain your opinion v.1

It is important to remember and learn from the past Use details and examples to explain your opinion v. 1
IT IS OFTEN SAID BU CERTAIN FOLKS THAT NOWADAYS TEACHINGINSTITUTE ARE SELECTING THEIR FURTHER PUPILS BASED ON THE ACADEMIC TALENT. WHERE AS THE REST OFTHE FOLKS THUINK THAT IT IS BETTER TO HAVE DISTINCT PASSION IN AMONGH THE junior AND STUDY TOGETHER. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE BENEFITTS FOR THE SCHOOLS OF SECECTING PUPILS ACCORDING TO THE THEIR BEST ABILITIES AND SECONDLY, WHY IT IS BETTER TO HAVE DIVERT ABILITY STUDENTS. LASTLY, STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT IT IS A GOOD IDEA TO MAKE EVERYONE TOGETHER WITH DISTINCT ABILITIES. ON THE ONE SIDE, IF academy SELCT THIER PUPIL BASED ON THEIR CAPABILITY, THSN THE SCHOOL RESULT WITH THE OTHER SHOOL MAY SURGE AND THIS WILL INCREASE THE REPUTATION OF THE INSTITUTION. HENJCE, THEY ARE ABLE TO MAKE MONEY BY DOING EDUCATION BUSINESS. FOR EXAMPLE, AS PER THE INDIAN university SURVEY, 80% OF THE PEOPLE PREFER TO SEND THIER JUVENILE IN THE SCHOOL WHICH HAS A CLEVER pupil REPUTATION. ON THE OTHER HAND, THE MAJOR REASON BEHIND HAVING DIFFERNTKIND OF graduate IS THAT THEY CAN LEARN BETTER TO BE SUCCESSFUL IN EACH AND EVERY STEP AND HOW TO BE A GENTAL AS A HUMAN BY SHARIG EACHOTHER'S PASSION AND INTEREST. FOR INSTANCE, ACCORDING TO THE ITELIGENT DEPARMENT OF THE UK, 905 OF THE SCHOOLS HAVE THE DIVERT pupil WHO HAVE THE DIFFERENT INTEREST AND CAPABILIT FROM EACH OTHER. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW EVERY undergraduate IS DIFFERENT THAN EVERY OTHER undergraduate GET A CHANNCE TO LEARN NEW THING FROM ANOTHER undergraduate. THIS MAY MAKE INTELLIGENT PUPILS MORE INTELLIGENT. IN CONCLUSION, ANY CAPABILITI INDEED PROVIDE ADVANTAGE IN LIFE FOR BOTH THE STUDENT AND THE INSTITUTION. NEVERTHELESS, MAKING DISCRIMINATION IN THE EDUCATION FIELD MAY LEAD TO THE CONFLICT FORMATION AMONG THE THE JUVENILE, PERHAPS, WITH SOME CAUTION BY THE INSTITUTION MIGHT AVOIDE THIS FUTURE ISSUES AMONG THE LEARNERS.
IT IS
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OFTEN
SAID BU CERTAIN FOLKS THAT NOWADAYS
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TEACHINGINSTITUTE
ARE SELECTING THEIR
FURTHER
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PUPILS
BASED ON THE ACADEMIC TALENT.
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WHERE AS
THE REST
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OFTHE
FOLKS
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THUINK
THAT IT IS BETTER TO HAVE DISTINCT PASSION IN
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AMONGH
THE junior AND STUDY TOGETHER.
FIRSTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE
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BENEFITTS
FOR THE
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SCHOOLS
OF
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SECECTING
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PUPILS
ACCORDING TO
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THE THEIR BEST
ABILITIES AND
SECONDLY
, WHY IT IS BETTER TO HAVE
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DIVERT
ABILITY STUDENTS.
LASTLY
,
STRONGLY
BELIEVE THAT IT IS A
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GOOD
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IDEA
TO
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MAKE
EVERYONE TOGETHER WITH DISTINCT ABILITIES.

ON THE ONE SIDE, IF academy
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SELCT
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THIER
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PUPIL
BASED ON THEIR CAPABILITY,
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THSN
THE
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SCHOOL
RESULT WITH THE OTHER
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SHOOL
MAY SURGE AND THIS WILL INCREASE THE REPUTATION OF THE INSTITUTION.
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HENJCE
, THEY ARE ABLE TO
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MAKE
MONEY BY DOING EDUCATION BUSINESS.
FOR EXAMPLE
, AS PER THE INDIAN university SURVEY, 80% OF THE
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PEOPLE
PREFER TO
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SEND
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THIER
JUVENILE IN THE
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SCHOOL
WHICH HAS A CLEVER
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pupil
REPUTATION.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, THE MAJOR REASON BEHIND HAVING
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DIFFERNTKIND
OF graduate IS THAT THEY CAN LEARN BETTER TO BE SUCCESSFUL IN EACH AND EVERY STEP AND HOW TO BE A
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GENTAL
AS A HUMAN BY
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SHARIG
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EACHOTHER
'S PASSION AND INTEREST.
FOR INSTANCE
, ACCORDING TO THE
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ITELIGENT
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DEPARMENT
OF THE UK, 905 OF THE
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SCHOOLS
HAVE
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THE DIVERT
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pupil
WHO HAVE THE
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DIFFERENT
INTEREST AND
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CAPABILIT
FROM EACH OTHER.

FROM MY POINT OF VIEW EVERY undergraduate IS
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DIFFERENT
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THAN
EVERY OTHER undergraduate
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GET
A
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CHANNCE
TO LEARN NEW THING FROM ANOTHER undergraduate. THIS MAY
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MAKE
INTELLIGENT
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PUPILS
MORE INTELLIGENT.

IN CONCLUSION
, ANY
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CAPABILITI
INDEED
PROVIDE ADVANTAGE IN LIFE FOR BOTH THE STUDENT AND THE INSTITUTION.
NEVERTHELESS
, MAKING DISCRIMINATION IN THE EDUCATION FIELD MAY LEAD TO THE CONFLICT FORMATION AMONG
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THE THE
JUVENILE, PERHAPS, WITH
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SOME
CAUTION BY THE INSTITUTION MIGHT
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AVOIDE
THIS FUTURE ISSUES AMONG THE LEARNERS.
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IELTS essay It is important to remember and learn from the past Use details and examples to explain your opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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