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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.2

It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2
When students have to do researches they can use several materials. They could go to the library and use books or they could access the internet to study. From my perspective, I disagree with those who prefer books. I believe that internet should be use preferably since it has the most up to date information, and there also tools that students could use such as discussion groups to do their researches. Moreover the internet could be reached wherever the student goes from any device at any time. To start with, students should use the internet instead of books to do their researches since it has the latest information ever. Almost all studies and their sources are downloading in the internet. In that case students could use the most up to date information and base their researches based on a good source. All the most important websites post information for students, and for the rest of the people to be used not only for studies purposes but also to gain general knowledge. There are universities that dedicated their efforts to post their most recent studies for those who need to do researches in a certain field. When I was studying for my Pharmacology test I used to browse a lot over the internet and I found such a lot of valuable information that helped me during my preparation time over my university website. Second, students could use several tools that are in the internet to study proficiently. In my case I used to study from different discussion’s groups over the internet. Those groups’ administrators sometimes posted questions and the rest of the students answered those questions creating very interesting discussions. That was a very valuable tool for me because made me stick more in the answers than if I learn them from a book. Sometimes students posted a direct link to free e-books with information about the theme in discussion. Last but not least, The internet compared with any book from the library, could be access from any device. Nowadays students are very aware of technology. They use their laptops, tablets, desktop computers and their phone to have access to the internet. With the simple fact of having internet connection they could study wherever they go and at any time. In my case I used to study during my way to home in the bus. I traveled 30 minutes in my way back to home and from the house to school. I spend that time studying from my IPhone. I had a very good internet service that allowed me to reach it very faster. I had several apps that helped a lot to practice the material. As a conclusion, I disagree with the statement that for students is better to use printed material instead of use the internet to do research. The internet has the latest information with several tools that can be reached it wherever the student goes that make them to study better.
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since it has the latest
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ever. Almost all
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studies
and their sources are downloading
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could
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the most up to date
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and base their
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researches
based on a
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good
source. All the most
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websites post
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purposes
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to gain general knowledge. There are universities that dedicated their efforts to post their most recent
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studies
for those who need to do
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researches
in a certain field. When I was studying for my Pharmacology
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test
I
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used
to browse a lot over the internet and I found such
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a lot of
valuable
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information
that
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helped
me during my preparation time over my university website.

Second,
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several
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that are
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in the internet
to
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proficiently
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from
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discussion’s groups over the internet. Those groups’ administrators
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sometimes
posted questions and the rest of the
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students
answered those questions creating
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very
interesting discussions. That was a
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valuable
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for me
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made me stick more in the answers than if I learn them from a
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students
posted a direct link to free e-books with
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about the theme in discussion.

Last
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not least, The internet compared with any
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from the library, could be access from any device. Nowadays
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students
are
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aware of technology. They
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their laptops, tablets, desktop computers and their phone to have access to the internet. With the simple fact of having internet connection they could
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study
wherever they go and at any time. In my case I
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to
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study
during my way to home in the bus. I traveled 30 minutes in my way back to home and from the
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to school. I spend that time studying from my
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I
had several apps that
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helped
a lot to practice the material.

As a conclusion, I disagree with the statement that for
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students
is better to
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use
printed material
instead
of
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use
the internet to do
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research
. The internet has the latest
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information
with several
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tools
that can
be reached
it wherever the
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student
goes that
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make
them to
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better.
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43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
494 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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