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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they begin university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.2

All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they begin university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2
Over the last few decades, language enhanced the communication skills among humanity. Exposing children to other languages at early stage is an immense benefit to them. I agree with the idea that children should be asked to take foreign language class at the beginning of their education to their university level. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs. First, it assists the child speaks like a native speaker. As children growing, they have the capacity to assimilate fast and also imitate easily. Teaching them foreign language at early life will give them the opportunity of learning the language quick and speak it like language owner. Moreover, taking them this language to their university level will also help them to have longer time to master the language. For example, my cousin started learning Danish at 3 years, he was opportune to learn till the time he gained admission into university. He speaks Danish fluently and was able to meet one of his lecturers that came from Denmark who assisted him for employment after graduating. Secondly, it gives self-confidence of meeting people. Children like an environment where they can express themselves. Learning a foreign language will make it easy to associate with people that speak the same language, this will motivate them and give boldness of relating to people around them. My personal experience as an example, I speak Spanish fluently because I was required to take it as one of my subjects when in primary school. This make me happier relating with people that speak this language which has brought me excellent achievements. In conclusion, I strongly belief that foreign language class should be introduced at early age till university day because it enhances the fluency of the language and also give self confidence in relating with people of the same language.
Over the last few decades,
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language
enhanced the communication
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skills
among humanity. Exposing
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children
to other
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languages
at early stage is an immense benefit to them. I
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agree
with the
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idea
that
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children
should
be asked
to take
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foreign
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language
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class
at the beginning of their education to their
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university
level. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will
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explain
in the following paragraphs.

First
, it assists the child
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speaks
like a native speaker. As
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children
growing, they have the capacity to assimilate
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fast
and
also
imitate
easily
. Teaching them
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foreign
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language
at early life will
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give
them the opportunity of learning the
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language
quick and
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speak
it like
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language
owner.
Moreover
, taking them this
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language
to their
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university
level will
also
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help
them to have longer time to master the
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language
.
For example
, my cousin
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started
learning Danish at 3 years, he was opportune to learn till the time he gained admission into
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university
. He
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speaks
Danish
fluently
and was able to
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meet
one of his lecturers that came from Denmark who assisted him for employment after graduating.

Secondly
, it
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gives
self-confidence of meeting
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people
.
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Children
like an environment where they can express themselves. Learning a
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foreign
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language
will
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make
it easy to associate with
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people
that
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speak
the same
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language
, this will motivate them and
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give
boldness of relating to
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people
around them. My personal experience as an example, I
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speak
Spanish
fluently
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because
I
was required
to take it as one of my subjects when in primary school. This
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make
me happier relating with
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people
that
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speak
this
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language
which has brought me excellent achievements.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
belief that
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foreign
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language
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class
should
be introduced
at early age till
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university
day
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because
it enhances the fluency of the
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language
and
also
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give
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self confidence
in relating with
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people
of the same
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language
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they begin university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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