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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the characteristics of successful leaders is a sense of responsibility for accepting their mistakes. v.90

One of the characteristics of successful leaders is a sense of responsibility for accepting their mistakes. v. 90
It is true to say that some people argue that public service is good for easy people while others believe that private vehicles much better in this issue. However, In my opinion, I firmly believe that the public system is excellent for making our life easier and comfortable. There are many reasons why public service is excellent. First and foremost, this service is good for poor people. Most of the people in our country are poor and they do not high paid service worker. That is the way they go to one place to another by bus or train at the cheapest cost. Besides, this service gives another service is that the number of people travel at a time. For example, The New York Times recently published news that 82% of the people of Dallas city love to travel public bus and this safe their time from traffic. However, sometimes it kills our valuable time by their personal or crucial schedule and makes us very disappointed. On the other hand, private service makes our life much easier and comfortable. Initially, it saves us time and management systems. This service much comfortable and friendly and it is controlled fully in our mode. For instance, when we think to join a party or family program, we prefer to go with private vehicles, it makes our social status as well. Experienced, private system helps to increase oil and traffic jam as well. In conclusion, considering the both views I firmly believe that although the private system is good, public service is excellent in this issue and finally the government considering some steps to maintain better service for their civilians.
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some
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argue that
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public
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service
is
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good
for easy
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people
while others believe that
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private
vehicles much better in this issue.
However
, In my opinion, I
firmly
believe that the
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public
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system
is excellent for making our life easier and comfortable.

There are
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many
reasons why
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public
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service
is excellent.
First
and foremost, this
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service
is
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good
for poor
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people
. Most of the
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people
in our country are
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poor and
they do not high paid
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service
worker.

That is
the way they go to one place to another by bus or train at the cheapest cost.
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, this
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service
gives another
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service
is that the number of
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people
travel at a
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.
For example
, The New York
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recently published news that 82% of the
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people
of Dallas city
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love
to travel
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public
bus and this safe their
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time
from traffic.
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,
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sometimes
it kills our valuable
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by their personal or crucial schedule and
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makes
us
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disappointed.

On the other hand
,
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private
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makes
our life much easier and comfortable.
Initially
, it saves us
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time
and management
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systems
. This
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service
much comfortable and friendly and it
is controlled
fully
in our mode.
For instance
, when we
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to
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join
a party or family program, we prefer to
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go with
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private
vehicles, it
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makes
our social status
as well
. Experienced,
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private
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system
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helps
to increase oil and traffic jam
as well
.

In conclusion
, considering the both views I
firmly
believe that although the
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private
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system
is
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good
,
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public
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is excellent in this issue and
finally
the
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government
considering
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some
steps to maintain better
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service
for their civilians.
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IELTS essay One of the characteristics of successful leaders is a sense of responsibility for accepting their mistakes. v. 90

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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