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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern transportation and shipping have made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion. v.875

Modern transportation and shipping have made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion. v. 875
Modern transportation and shipping have turned around the lifestyle of every individual enormously. Things are more comfortable to access with the invention of many advanced technologies that have led to modern transportation. I agree with the idea of the current transport and shipping makes people a better world to live for two reasons. We have the opportunity to save a lot of time, and our travels are accessible. First and foremost, we save a lot of time in the current era than we used to in the past with the advent of modern transportation. Nothing is beyond reach or impractical with current transit. For instance, previously with only horse ride or bullock carts, reaching from one state to another was a few days to week process and people mostly had to avoid it to save their time. But, now with the airplanes, nonstop trains, this time has shrunk to a day. In this sense, nowadays people prefer to use the new advances in transportation because they treasure their time as a valuable thing in their life. Another point to consider important is that the transportation in the current era has made travel easier and more fun. When it comes to more comfortable, earlier people working too far from their family would almost lose touch with them because of the difficulty involved in the travel to their loved one. But, now they can take a flight and trip to and forth their home without problems. International travel has become a common thing for most of us to spend our vacation. In sum, the new transportation provides us the opportunity to feel more relaxed in every travel and also we can save a lot of time travel around the world. In this sense, I think that this is an excellent opportunity for us to enjoy our life entirely.
Modern
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transportation
and shipping have turned around the lifestyle of every individual
enormously
. Things are more comfortable to access with the invention of
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many
advanced technologies that have led to modern
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transportation
. I
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agree
with the
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idea
of the
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current
transport and shipping
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makes
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people
a better world to
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live
for two reasons. We have the opportunity to
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save
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a lot of
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time
, and our
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travels
are accessible.

First
and foremost, we
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save
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a lot of
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time
in the
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current
era than we
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used
to in the past with the advent of modern
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transportation
. Nothing is beyond reach or impractical with
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current
transit.
For instance
, previously with
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only
horse ride or bullock carts, reaching from one state to another was a few days to week process and
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people
mostly
had to avoid it to
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save
their
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time
.
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But
,
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now
with the airplanes, nonstop trains, this
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time
has shrunk to a day. In this sense, nowadays
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people
prefer to
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use
the new advances in
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transportation
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because
they treasure their
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time
as a valuable thing in their life.

Another point to consider
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important
is that the
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transportation
in the
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current
era has made
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travel
easier and more fun. When it
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comes
to more comfortable, earlier
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people
working too far from their family would almost lose touch with them
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because
of the difficulty involved in the
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travel
to their
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loved
one.
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But
,
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now
they can take a flight and trip to and forth their home without problems. International
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travel
has become a common thing for most of us to spend our vacation.

In sum, the new
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transportation
provides us the opportunity to feel more relaxed in every
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travel
and
also
we can
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save
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a lot of
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time
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travel
around the world. In this sense, I
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think
that this is an excellent opportunity for us to enjoy our life
entirely
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Modern transportation and shipping have made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion. v. 875

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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