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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? 1）Interrupt and correct t v.872

Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? 1）Interrupt and correct t v. 872
usually, the teachers prepare their educational materials well and read a lot before preparing it. but anyone can make mistakes and may have un affirmed information. whether this kind of mistakes are acceptable is a debate. some people think it is unacceptable for a teacher to give uncertain kind of knowledge, whereas, others believe that no one has a perfect aspects and can avoid this kind of mistakes. i strongly believe that it is a part of the teaching process. in fact, this play an important role in enrolling students in teaching process. i feel this way for two reason, which i will explore in the following essay. to begin with, all the teachers have been chosen according to their qualifications, all the teachers are well qualified and can provide precise information to student as they are trained to do so. for example, one-day my mathematics teacher wrote on the board a wrong equation, some of the students were shocked and told her that was wrong, while other students didn' t notice that. she intended to do this to distinguish which of the students is concentrating in the class and which are not. moreover, its is very important to have a good base of communication between students and their teacher, hence students become more less stressed to ask about anything they feel not getting right throughout the class. what' s-more, to reject others incorrect information is a way of expressing opinions. i mean students are encouraged to speak up what do they think, that is an essential part of building a strong independent character. when the teacher listens to what students suggests, she helps them in becoming more efficient individuals in the community, however, she sometimes feels embarrassed if she did unintended mistakes. that why it is called an institution because it is depending on group work between the teachers and their students. in conclusion, correcting mistakes done by teachers immediately is nothing but helpful, i strongly believe it produces more confident and creative generations, by this the teachers are enrolled in an efficient teaching progress, they teach students to accept others mistakes and help to overcome them. i suggest teachers to have more discussion circles so the students will be more involved in life.
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usually
, the
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teachers
prepare their educational materials well and read a lot
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before
preparing it.
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but
anyone can
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make
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mistakes
and may have
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un
affirmed information.
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whether
this kind of
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mistakes
are acceptable is a debate.
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some
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people
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think
it is unacceptable for a
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teacher
to give uncertain kind of knowledge, whereas, others believe that no one has a perfect aspects and can avoid this kind of
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mistakes
.
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i
strongly
believe that it is a part of the teaching process.
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in
fact, this play an
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important
role in enrolling
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students
in teaching process.
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i
feel this way for two reason, which
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i
will explore in the following essay.

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to
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begin
with, all the
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teachers
have
been chosen
according to their qualifications, all the
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teachers
are well qualified and can provide precise information to
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student
as they
are trained
to do
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so
.
for example
, one-day my mathematics
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teacher
wrote on the board a
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wrong
equation,
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some of the
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students
were shocked
and
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told
her that was
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wrong
, while
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other
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students
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didn&
#039; t notice that.
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she
intended to do this to distinguish which of the
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students
is concentrating in the
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class
and which are not.
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moreover
, its is
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very
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important
to have a
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good
base of communication between
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students
and their
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teacher
,
hence
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students
become
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more less
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stressed
to ask about anything they feel not getting right throughout the
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class
.

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what&
#039; s-more, to reject others incorrect information is a way of expressing opinions.
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i
mean
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students
are encouraged
to speak up what do they
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think
,
that is
an essential part of building a strong independent character.
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when
the
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teacher
listens to what
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students
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suggests
, she
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helps
them in becoming more efficient individuals in the community,
however
, she
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sometimes
feels embarrassed if she did unintended
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mistakes
.
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that
why it
is called
an institution
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because
it
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is depending
on group work between the
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teachers
and their students.

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in
conclusion, correcting
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mistakes
done by
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teachers
immediately is nothing
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but
helpful,
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i
strongly
believe it produces more confident and creative generations, by this the
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teachers
are enrolled
in an efficient teaching progress, they teach
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students
to accept others
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mistakes
and
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help
to overcome them.
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i
suggest
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teachers
to have more discussion circles
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so
the
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students
will be more involved in life.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes

IELTS essay Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? 1）Interrupt and correct t v. 872

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
375 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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