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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing Games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to Support your answer. v.844

Playing Games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to Support your answer. v. 844
In today’s rapidly running world, everybody have to face tight schedule to win the race of competition. So as everybody need some break if time permits them to enjoy some leisure time. Although various options of entertainment are available today like watching movies, friends and family get – together, playing games, hiking or trip to other city but among all of them games are most feasible activity, which one can prefer to get some relief from their constricted schedule. Playing game can bring us various benefit but does it teach us anything about life? Well, it is difficult to comprehend. Games are indeed a very dynamic activity but cannot say it also teaches us. My reason are based on personal and public aspects. Many prefer to play indoor games, similarly several prefers to enjoy outdoor games. Whatever is the form of game, it can be said a good exercise. It rejuvenate us and sharpens are certain skills like obstacle breaking with time –limit, sharps are brain. In my opinion we are able to play games because we already deal with more practical barriers and obstacles in our real life. I have never seen any anybody able to lead his life successfully merely on the practice of playing games. It does not give us any practical knowledge or lesson that could help us anywhere in our life. Undoubtedly it does help in maintaining mental and physical fitness and motivating one-selves like whenever I play any game on mobile and able to score highest or win’s the game, it boost my confidence and prompt me to take the harder and faster stage of game. Life’s experience teaches us ways to tackle life impractically as well as practically, not the experience of playing games. I used to be a state level basketball player and participated in many games. I remembered a game against Haryana state team, it was cut- throat competition between both teams. Every participant of both teams played with their full efforts to win but still they were ahead of us. So we changed our strategy and shuffled the players by pretending one of our player injured. so that we can send our potential player. Still lost by single point. If I seek what that game taught me for my life? I can only say that it taught me to be courageous and proactive to take risk at required time. Which cannot be said a lesson learnt that can help to handle actual life problem. I cannot change the syllabus of final test. If I am not able to understand it, whatever proactive or spirited I would be, as it would be not wise to do so. Many games are enjoyed by the people, now people even go to shops to play games on machines, some play hi- tech video games at home, other performs fancy sports like ice- skating but all of the games contributes to boost up our inner and physical strength. Human brain developed as human grows as well his capabilities of dealing with life and its stages, games merely aid’s humans for reliving their stress but does not teach anything for their realistic life. All in all games can be remarked as source of entertainment.
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running world, everybody
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as everybody need
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some
break if
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time
permits them to enjoy
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some
leisure
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time
. Although various options of entertainment are available
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today
like watching movies, friends and family
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get
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together,
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playing
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games
, hiking or trip to other city
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among all of them
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games
are most feasible activity, which one can prefer to
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get
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some
relief from their constricted schedule.
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Playing
game can bring us various benefit
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but
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does
it
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teach
us anything about
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life
? Well, it is difficult to comprehend.
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Games
are
indeed
a
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very
dynamic activity
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but
cannot say it
also
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teaches
us. My reason
are based
on personal and public aspects.

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prefer to
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play
indoor
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games
,
similarly
several prefers to enjoy outdoor
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games
. Whatever is the form of game, it can
be said
a
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good
exercise. It
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rejuvenate
us and sharpens are certain
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skills
like obstacle breaking with
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time
–limit, sharps are brain. In my opinion we are
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able
to
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play
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games
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because
we already deal with more practical barriers and obstacles in our real
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life
. I have never
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seen
any anybody
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able
to lead his
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life
successfully
merely
on the practice of
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playing
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games
. It
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does
not give us any practical knowledge or lesson that could
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help
us anywhere in our
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life
.
Undoubtedly
it
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does
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help
in maintaining mental and physical fitness and motivating one-selves like whenever I
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play
any game on mobile and
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able
to score highest or win’s the game, it
Did you mean "boosts"?
boost
my confidence and prompt me to take the harder and faster stage of game.
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Life’s
experience
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teaches
us ways to tackle
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life
impractically
as well
as
practically
, not the experience of
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playing
games.

I
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used
to be a state level basketball
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player
and participated in
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many
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games
. I remembered a game against Haryana state team, it was
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cut
- throat competition between both teams. Every participant of both teams played with their full efforts to win
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but
still
they were ahead of us.
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So
we
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changed
our strategy and shuffled the
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players
by pretending one of our
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player
injured.
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so
that we can
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send
our potential
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player
.
Still
lost by single point. If I seek what that game taught me for my
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life
? I can
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only
say that it taught me to be courageous and proactive to take
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risk
at required
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time
.
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cannot
be said
a lesson
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learnt
that can
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help
to handle actual
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life
problem. I cannot
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change
the syllabus of final
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test
. If I am not
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able
to understand it, whatever proactive or spirited I would be, as it would be not wise to do
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so
.

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Many
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games
are enjoyed
by the
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people
,
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now
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people
even go to shops to
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play
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games
on machines,
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some
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play
hi- tech video
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games
at home, other performs fancy sports like ice- skating
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but
Consider using "all the".
all of the
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games
contributes to boost up our inner and physical strength. Human brain developed as human grows
as well
his capabilities of dealing with
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life
and its stages,
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games
merely
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aid’s
humans for reliving their
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stress
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but
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does
not
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teach
anything for their realistic
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life
. All in all
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games
can
be remarked
as source of entertainment.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
53Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay Playing Games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to Support your answer. v. 844

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
538 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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